System Status: Online
Dhvani voluntarily accepted the task of being a system. For a small chance to be reincarnated again, she aspires to level up and complete her task as soon as possible. Ajay has everything. He is happy, and successful but inexplicably bound to a system that chatters in his mind. The system wants him to do tasks so it can level up and again, do more tasks. From being frustrated to enjoying, he changes gradually. But can he do something for her that he would never want to? And will she really want to unbind when she remembers something from the distant forgotten past? ____________ A snippet from an upcoming chapter : Dhvani stood in the endless white of the Memory Ocean waiting for his answer. He looked at her for a long time and ruthlessly rejected her. "We were never meant to meet. You should remember your duties as well." He left her there and he never saw her again. Did he regret his parting words? Yes. But can he change anything? He hoped so. ____________ A request to readers: Please tell me how you feel about the story in the comments so I can improve my writing. Thank you for reading! There may be mistakes in my writing and you can tell me.
Improvement
Dhvani was stuck and she felt as if her soul was evaporating. But she got a reprieve because Tarsh had acted and he made a barrier around her. The. barrier was broken but it kept repairing itself at all times. This was like writing a program. The program learns from the dynamic input and then changes itself repeatedly. Just like an AI. Real life is the inspiration for many things.
Dhvanj kept holding on. She had to because there was no one else who could help her now. She had to rely on herself to get out of this trouble.
Ajay didn't know what was happening but he was in immense pain. The pain kept spreading from inside to outside making him feel cool and hot at the same time.