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Strike The Sun!

Penulis: onemeterofsky
Magical Realism
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What is Strike The Sun!

Baca novel Strike The Sun! yang ditulis oleh penulis onemeterofsky yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. The Sun had mutated and had raised the radiation levels in the Earth.Three years have passed since this apocalyse occured. Humanity begins to rise up against the challenges caused by this phenomenon.J...

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The Sun had mutated and had raised the radiation levels in the Earth. Three years have passed since this apocalyse occured. Humanity begins to rise up against the challenges caused by this phenomenon. Join Allen Stryka as he journeys towards beating the source of humanity's misfortune - The Sun itself!

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A Wishing Shadow

Ever since a golden meteor crashed the moon and turn it into oblivion and become Earth's new moon, the world changed where you can give life to something, and it would serve you for a lifespan. Such something was called Tsukumogami. That was such a world Cell, real name, Saibo Hei living. Humans can give life to something when they hit nineteen and are obliged to enroll in a special school. Based on how you performed, you could get a top position in society or the opposite. There's an easy way to get it, by entering a tournament where you fight with your Tsukumogami. To win, one must fight the toughest people out there. Don't want to deal with it, Cell made a wish to his shadow. In five months, he got what he wished for at the cost of his precious memories, and he regretted it. Waking up in the hospital with no precious memories, he soon met his long-lost twin sister. He was taking a smoke outside of the hospital when a fateful encounter occurred. It awakens his forgotten memories of when he was a child to his teenage years. Human experiment when he was a child, made a deal with a certain radical group when he was eleven, made enemies of both yakuza and mafia groups, and probably much more. He had no idea how his memories disappeared, but he had a feeling it had to do something when he make a deal with that radical group. With his peaceful life at stake, he walked forward to face his problems, only to find out he'll never have a peaceful life again.

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The D£vil's Bride

Have you ever been in a situation where no matter how much you try, how much effort you put in.. you still can't make ends meet? Yes? No?? Well, This seemed to Lizabeth Brown's fate. No matter how much she tried, how much effort she put in, she always got fired from every single job she went to. Why? Simple, each boss of hers were all perverts and being a feminist, all she did was put them in their place.. but whenever she did that, she always got fired. Sometimes she looses count of how many places she's worked in. "10 this month? ..I thought it was more than th—oh, it's 25." She's a slender yet, shapey 25 years old lady. Fair skinned, short.. putting her amongst tall people would be considered a sin, she has long brunette hair and green emerald eyes. Yet, with all these unique feature [except for her height of course] Lizabeth never once thought of becoming an escort. She's hot headed, stubborn, feisty and a feminist, but she wasn't ambitious.. she wasn't ambitious.. she was great in need. Maybe that's why she accepted a contract with the reward of Two million USD if she becomes the bride to one of the scariest human in Sicily? Rumors also have it that although this man is feared by literally everyone.. his face was completely deformed, ugly and unbearable to look at. Some say he fell into a pool of acid, others say he got into a car accident which left the left side of his face hideous and some say he went out hunting and a wild animal ripped off the side of his face and that's why he wears a mask. After coming face to face with this brutal human, Lizabeth finally realized that she had gone completely nuts to actually accept this suicidal contract! But it was too late.. She has already entered the Devil's den and from the looks of it, there seemed to be no escape route. . . . Who is this.. Mr Devil? Why does this Devil cover his face? Are the rumours actually true? Did he get his face deformed by acid?? How will Lizabeth cope with such a cold and arrogant human being? What made him cold and aloof in the first place?

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

What a revolutionary idea! The thoughts of creating such a masterpiece! I must say this has potential and I enjoyed my time reading this. The flow and sentence structure is on point. I must say I didn't stutter at all! I am hoping to see this novel last till its end. This is good! So keep writing! You got enormous potential!

supporthero
supportheroLv11supporthero

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Helldragon_xd
Helldragon_xdLv1Helldragon_xd

The characters are well-written and world design is great. Some issues I would focus on is the character texts could use slightly better formatting and the tempo of revealing information. This is just my personal preferance, when you talked about the mutations that occurred from the sun I think revealing that humans have also developed powers in chapter one serves the story's pacing better. You can add more information like how it might be very rare to occur, and then Allen managing to develop one is like winning a lottery or something. I think also telling how Allen plans to destroy the sun, aside from having flame powers, should also be elaborated in chapter 2. It's just my view on it though, the story overall is still written well.

man_k
man_kLv1man_k

I like the idea... it's captivating...world-building and the plot are nice.. the charactors development is good...though I feel it would be more enjoyable if things move a little faster...

Inochishirazu_06
Inochishirazu_06Lv1Inochishirazu_06

I'm not familiar with giving book reviews but here it goes. The story is interesting and entertaining, the events are somewhat new to me and that makes me curious on how the story will go. The last chapter feels like a cliffhanger, for me that is. The narration is smooth, not too complicated nor to vague and it's not confusing. It's a great story.

Melsdar
MelsdarLv10Melsdar

A good and unique story with a pretty interesting plot. I also like some of the characters. I'm really looking forward to the continuation. Hopefully it doesn't stop halfway. I'm sure your story will be a success, I'm looking forward to it!

TysonBoss
TysonBossLv1TysonBoss

I'm liking the premise, though I feel that a lot more descriptions could be added. This is a very different world from the one we live in, so why not describe the superpowers in more detail? Also, it's personally hard for me to imagine that the MC is 25-years-old given the thinking that we've been exposed to, but perhaps this will be explained later. I am enjoying the story so far, a lot of things are happening, which is nice.

PRO_GAMER_2345
PRO_GAMER_2345Lv3PRO_GAMER_2345

Really like how the author wrote the story using a new approach. The story highlights the characters fully. Although there are some things not explained fully. It has great potential to be a good novel. Looking forward to it.

onemeterofsky
onemeterofskyPenulisonemeterofsky

Hello Author here. Please do try out this novel. I try to improve my writing style as I upload further and further. So don't hesitate to comment if you do find some corrections.. Fun fact: if you read the title phonetically, it might sound like "Stryka-san!" So perhaps this is a story about Mr. Stryka all along...

Prideful_Enigma
Prideful_EnigmaLv1Prideful_Enigma

I like the premise of the story and the characters, despite having similarities with common tropes, seems like they have potential. The main plot is interesting yet it leaves a lot of questions which is fine, the only problem I have is the errors that appears from time to time. Godspeed author, you've got potential to be great

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