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Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi

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When God gave me three wishes, I thought that I would choose where I would go... Turns out, I didn't. --- I own nothing, only OC’s. No harem. And just roll with it, please.

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Chapter 1Survival in the streets

An eight-year-old boy was walking down the street, hand's in his pockets and a small brown backpack on his back. Around him, people were too busy to notice him due to his small frame, it wasn't like they had the time to, anyway.

Ever since the Empire came to this planet named "Lothal" things were never the same. It was either their way or being imprisoned for "treason".

His parent's in this life were one of the few that spoke out against them and just the day before, they were taken away.

The boy knew there was no hope for the two, that was the reason for his new status.

"Homeless".

He suppressed a chuckle at that. He had a home, just not in this life, he never really called the two that gave birth to him, mother or father, it felt like he was betraying his real parents. He never imagined dying from a stab wound either but he did, apparently, the afterlife was not real either, but God was real and gave him the "Traditional" three wishes.

Now, he didn't watch much anime but he knew what was going on, sort of, the only two shows he watched were Fate/Stay night and an isekai anime he didn't remember the name of.

Not wanting to go to the messed-up world of Fate, he thought he would choose to go back to earth but this time, he didn't want to die from a mugger, however, his reasoning for his first wish was simple. No matter how much you know something, in theory, it doesn't matter if you don't have experience.

So, according to what he knew about Fate, he decided to get Archer's fighting experience, and it did not disappoint. for someone who could scan and instantly gain skills for a certain weapon, he was good at combating them without one, and the abundance of experience with armed combat was useful too.

Since being stabbed didn't feel nice the first time around, his second wish was a though body.

And not knowing which country he would be born into, he decided to wish to understand and be able to speak any language, he would work on writing when he had time.

But contrary to his expectation, he did not get to choose where he would go, just a flick of the god's wrist and he was being born.

From what he deduced, he was in Starwars, which was bad, he had no idea when he was and he had no idea what would happen since he only watched one movie and googled lightsabers and the force since he was curious.

It was interesting, to say the least.

Oh, and there was another interesting fact about him.

He was apparently "Force sensitive".

Archer had participated in a lot of grail wars in his time, he could feel if there was something weird in the area, and that transferred over to me, so he could feel the force around him, going through him, surrounding him.

He would investigate the weird magic later, now he needed to survive. Preferably for a long time, too.

Turning his head to the left, he looked down at an empty alley. Shrugging mentally, he walked forward, looking for any openings that might lead to an empty room.

Unfortunately, there were none. Silently, the eight-year-old boy continued down the road, looking for shelter.

It looked like it would be a while before he had a roof over his head again since he couldn't return to his original house since the soldiers might return there to check the place for anything his "Parents" might have left behind.

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The black-haired boy was in a square room, which was almost fully below the ground, it was an abandoned house's basement, the room seemed to be a storage space but it would work for now.

Taking off his backpack, the young boy took out two blankets and a pillow.

Laying one on the ground, he put the pillow on top of it and laid down, putting the other one over his shoulders. The night fell during his search but the place he found wouldn't last, he would grow and the opening that allowed him to enter would become too small for him. He needed to find a permanent residence soon.

But for now, this would do until he did.

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As soon as he woke up, he reached over to his bag and took out the food he packed, it would last him two weeks if he ate sparingly and after that, he would need to pay to eat, or steal.

Sighing as he took the last bite of his food, he looked out the opening, the first rays of light were reaching the opening and he took it as a signal for him to get a move on.

He needed to scavenge and look for a better residence.

Rolling up the blankets, he folded and packed them inside the bag again, followed by the pillow.

Pushing the bag out first, he crawled out of his new room. Standing up, he flung the backpack on his back and looked around.

No one was outside, as expected, it was too early.

Now, the first place he needed to find was the Red light district, the Storm troopers that go there get drunk to relax and he might be able to steal some armor and maybe even a blaster.

Walking out to the main road, he started walking down the street, looking at the single-story buildings, there were empty stands that would usually be filled with fruit, turning to the other side, he walked down another road, so far there were only normal houses. Some of the owners were walking out, not all human, some had green skin and pointy ears, and some had white fur and horns. Some had three fingers and big green eyes like a bug.

Sighing, he decided that he would start thinking about the weirdness of this world later, but for now, he needed to explore.

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funmaxwell
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I'll be honest I couldn't make it past the first chapter because it was so stupid. as the main character wasted his wishes on dumb things like having the combat experience of Archer from Fate stay night because the Mc wanted the ability to defend himself in close quarters. which Archer doesn't specialize in as he specializes in long distance combat. it would have been more rational for him to wish for the combative experience of a character like baki hanma. then the second wish is somehow worse than the first as he simply wishes to be tough without specifying how tough. so this wish could go wrong so badly as God in the story could just make him slightly tougher than the average Joe or tougher than any character in fiction. but it's the fact he didn't think to specify that just proves how stupid he is. then he wishes for the ability to understand all languages. which is useless in Star wars as there's freaking droids that can translate just about every language. if he'd used this wish for knowledge form a more advanced sci-fi universe he might have picked up the knowledge on how to build a universal translation device. as such things are pretty common in sci-fi. also I feel like I should point out his reasoning for picking this wish was he was concerned with not being able to understand the people around him. but it's pointless because babies and children learn languages much easier than adults. as his brain would have naturally picked up on the language easily. on top of that he thought he was reincarnating on Earth. this just makes it even dumber.

ExArgentum
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The main point of this review is that the novel had potential, but the choices made by the author create a flawed story. The author makes horrible wishes, forgets his wishes, and makes questionable decisions concerning the plot. Therefore, I wouldn't recommend anyone to read unless you're the type of person that enjoys awful stories. Expanding on the wishes, the author chose the worst wishes possible. He wished for "Archer's fighting experience," a "though body," and "[the ability] to speak any language." On top of somehow misspelling tough, the author chose random generalized, unspecific wishes. Another review highlighted this, stating that not specifying the wish, in the case of his wish about toughness, could cause the ROB to make the main character as tough as an average person. This problem applies to the "Archer's experience" wish as well. Who is archer? Archer is a class, not a person. The author claims that his main character made these wishes because he had no idea which world he was traveling to, which makes the problem worse. In the text, the main character comments that he is concerned about the Fate universe. If the main character were so concerned about the world, he would have chosen more specific wishes than "tough body" and "Archer experience." Perhaps, I don't know, actual powers? When I say that the author forgot his wishes, I mean that he only remembers that the main character has a "tough body." Archer's experience? The author forgot he had it. The ability to understand all languages? There wasn't a single use for it. Here's a minor spoiler that ties in with my third point about the author making questionable decisions. In the story, the main character chooses to sever his connection to force. As many know, this ability is not permanent. However, what he does during that time shows that the author forgot his wishes. During a time skip where he fights battles without the Force, the main character gets demolished. Coming out of those battles with many injuries causes the main character to realize he is nothing without the Force. All of a sudden, where did his first wish go? All the archers in Fate have many combat experiences, especially Emiya, whom the author alluded to basing the wish on when stating the wish. All of a sudden, the mc can't fight stormtroopers? Where did that experience go? Finally, touching upon the questionable decisions, the main one that sticks out is the author's decision to have the main character sever his connection to the Force. This severing could be due to many reasons that make sense. However, no, the mc had a temper tantrum after falling into one of the oldest tricks in the book; the illusion of a close dead person somehow being alive again. After escaping the illusion meant to remind him not to repeat past mistakes, he ignores the Holocron and severs his connection later. The stupid thing here is that his so-called mistake was not telling his sister to look both ways on the street since she jumped straight into traffic after she saw him. Moreover, he exposed his location since he was angry, and we can assume that the temple with the Holocron was later discovered and destroyed. A lot of stupid things occur, adding more and more flaws to the story. The author needs to fix his story and pay more attention to details. How do you forget your wishes?

GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

The main point of this review is that the novel had potential, but the choices made by the author create a flawed story. The author makes horrible wishes, forgets his wishes, and makes questionable decisions concerning the plot. Therefore, I wouldn't recommend anyone to read unless you're the type of person that enjoys awful stories. Expanding on the wishes, the author chose the worst wishes possible. He wished for "Archer's fighting experience," a "though body," and "[the ability] to speak any language." On top of somehow misspelling tough, the author chose random generalized, unspecific wishes. Another review highlighted this, stating that not specifying the wish, in the case of his wish about toughness, could cause the ROB to make the main character as tough as an average person. This problem applies to the "Archer's experience" wish as well. Who is archer? Archer is a class, not a person. The author claims that his main character made these wishes because he had no idea which world he was traveling to, which makes the problem worse. In the text, the main character comments that he is concerned about the Fate universe. If the main character were so concerned about the world, he would have chosen more specific wishes than "tough body" and "Archer experience." Perhaps, I don't know, actual powers? When I say that the author forgot his wishes, I mean that he only remembers that the main character has a "tough body." Archer's experience? The author forgot he had it. The ability to understand all languages? There wasn't a single use for it. Here's a minor spoiler that ties in with my third point about the author making questionable decisions. In the story, the main character chooses to sever his connection to force. As many know, this ability is not permanent. However, what he does during that time shows that the author forgot his wishes. During a time skip where he fights battles without the Force, the main character gets demolished. Coming out of those battles with many injuries causes the main character to realize he is nothing without the Force. All of a sudden, where did his first wish go? All the archers in Fate have many combat experiences, especially Emiya, whom the author alluded to basing the wish on when stating the wish. All of a sudden, the mc can't fight stormtroopers? Where did that experience go? Finally, touching upon the questionable decisions, the main one that sticks out is the author's decision to have the main character sever his connection to the Force. This severing could be due to many reasons that make sense. However, no, the mc had a temper tantrum after falling into one of the oldest tricks in the book; the illusion of a close dead person somehow being alive again. After escaping the illusion meant to remind him not to repeat past mistakes, he ignores the Holocron and severs his connection later. The stupid thing here is that his so-called mistake was not telling his sister to look both ways on the street since she jumped straight into traffic after she saw him. Moreover, he exposed his location since he was angry, and we can assume that the temple with the Holocron was later discovered and destroyed. A lot of stupid things occur, adding more and more flaws to the story. The author needs to fix his story and pay more attention to details. How do you forget your wishes?

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