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Shackles of Destiny

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Entangled in the threads of a predestined future and tempting life desires, a group of four teenagers learn and experience love, hatred and a number of emotions brought by their choices as they grow into adulthood. Each, hailing from different backgrounds, gets lost in the sweet presence of cute feelings that intesifies to a strong sense of want. They go through betrayals, heartbreak, misunderstandings, separation and most of all family dilemmas. It all starts when Hanji, a Japanese transfer student, joins their school. Laughter and jokes slowly turn to despair and separation. Join the four main characters- HanJi, Chaerry, Eugene and Chris- of Shackles of destiny on their journey of maturity and lessons they learn. A light-hearted novel that takes through a rollercoaster of emotions. It is your cliché teenage book that will feel relatable. It's a heartwarming book. The setup is of a real life situations.

Chapter 1The Butt encounter

It was Eugene, Chaerry's best friend, who brought up the hot widely debated topic of whether we have one or two butts into their girl talk. And since then, their conversation took no turn. They were, apparently solemnly, having a heated debate on that topic.

Just then Chaerry's eyes fell onto that thing she thought was her ultimate weapon to win this. They were standing along the corridors outside the classrooms. Suddenly, Chaerry puts forward both her hands, her index fingers pointing towards a certain someone's butt. She repeated "up down" mimicking the movement of the butt.

"And this, my friend, is what I meant when I said butts are two. See if it was one it would have moved at the same time. Like that. " She said beckoning at the experimental butt. Eugene felt strangely convinced. Her eyes now landed on the butt that was now on a halt. She looked up to meet the eyes of the owner and to her surprise he was actually looking at them.

Chaerry, with a proud grin, was looking at Eugene waiting for her approval. Eugene roughly nudged Chaerry's arm with her elbow.

Perplexed, Chaerry rushes her hands to her face to hide from the embarrassment. "He heard me" she whispered to her friend.

Her mind was now blank. Confrontation was not her cup of tea so she opted to run away from the scene.

"Chae wait! " Eugene screamed at her friend who was now sprinting across the corrider like a lunatic.

"No babe. I am heading to the washroom!" She yelled back.

She sat in the washroom where she was later joined by Eugene after apologizing to the guy.

"Welcome to another episode of Chaerry embarrassing herself. " She said sarcastically when Eugene entered the washroom. They stared at each other for seconds before breaking into a hysterical laughter that lasted for a while. This is them. They were used to doing embarrassing shit. As long as they had each other every embarrassment felt comical.

"That dude is stuck up for real! " Eugene said frustratingly as she explains from her desk how the apology went.

"You know what he said, " She scoffed before continuing, " You are surely not the one who owes me an apology Huh." She imitated his deeper than the sea voice before busting into a laughter.

"Lol! That's if we ever meet. "Chaerry rolled her eyes before she queried "How did he even hear us at first? Was that headphones for the sake of showing off."

The bell went off, before Eugene could add any words, signalling that they ought to get prepared for the next class. Punctual as ever, the teacher enters the room except that this time she had a company. " okay so students today we have a new transferred student. "Come in! " she said.

With honey-colored doe-like eyes, the student in talk had brunette silky smooth hair that filled his head covering his forehead till his eyebrows.

His clear milky skin sparked one question "WHAT IS YOUR SKIN CARE ROUTINE?!"

He walked in a cooly. Letting everyone mesmerised. It was obvious that he was a foreigner. "I am Hanji. Thank you." He said clearly trying to limit his words. Immediately then it dawned on Eugene that it was HiM.

"It's him " Eugene mouthed to Chaerry after distracting her from her doodling.

"Looks like after all am not gonna have an escape in this." She thought to herself after having an intense look at him and confirming it was him.

Is she really gonna have to apologize for checking out someone's butt????

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Hello! My first impression about your synopsis was like, ' Oh, interesting- wait, Author-sama is using words I do not know of, will the book be like this for the whole time! ?' • Writing Quality- 4 stars, but if I were to be honest and if WN would provide some other new Features for reviews, your writing quality is on par with 4.7 ratings. I like your writing style. It is fluid and does not seem to slack off and it's consistent. There were errors, in capitalization? Yes, that's it. The transition on Chapter 2 and 3 , there seems to be a little off. ( Or was I very sleepy? nvm) Story Development- 5 stars, I was hoping for anime boy wannabe to disregard the girl ( hehe I want the cold verrryyy cold type in this kind of book ) but anyhow Author-sama have lived up to my expectations! I did not thought that anime boy will be friendly...maybe it's because how miss C approached him from the start which is checking at his butt. A nice way of greeting a newcomer! XD But I cannot say much about the development since the book is still on its early stage, yes. it's too early to come up with a conclusion. I like it tho. Character Design- 5 stars ( Miss C was a bubbly girl, while animeboy wannabe was a cold looking guy- he was also a shy guy. As what I've read in the first three cha** hehe Updating Stability- 5 Stars World Background- since the book's settings was in real life, then the book itself is easy to apprehend and it's easy to imagine what's the setting of the said scene, which is a plus point for the author. I am hoping to read more of this book! I just love the quality and I hope I could write like this too!

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