Restarted again

The story is keeping the grip even tho It's just started and the characters development is amazing, I really loved the writing style as well.

The story is still in its early age so I didn't get the full plot but I know it's going to be really interesting! Also, your writing style is really very good! Keep up the good work!

im surprised at how much i enjoy this novel and the main character Sunrua this is such a fun story to read. i 100% recommended for people to read this novel. :)

4.6 from me. The story is good, and the plot is progressing well. I enjoy the character developments, and I can relate to them. However, some paragraphs are too long, and I would appreciate if they were reduced. Additionally, I suggest tweaking the sentences for improved clarity and flow. Keep up the work!

The characters are fleshed-out in this novel. You can easily gauge out their personalities and get attached to some. The action parts are good too 👌🏻👉🏻👉🏻👉🏻👉🏻In terms of writing, there's still some room for improvement—particularly in sentence structures. I noticed that some sentences were too long that it could be considered as a paragraph. Like, it's just 1 whole sentence but could actually be broken down into two or three instead. This often happens when the author is describing something—a character, an action, a thing. Rather than a bunch of commas, I suggest using an em dash (—) or parenthesis if there's an added thought/phrase in a complete sentence. However, props to the author for putting in the effort of describing, not only the mc, but all the other characters' features & surroundings. This makes me, as a reader, more invested in the story since I can imagine them better.👉🏻👉🏻👉🏻👉🏻Also, I think it would be better if you break down the paragraphs a bit more for ease of reading. Some paragraphs are "too big-looking" on a phone. This may make some readers get overwhelmed and in turn, get lazy to read. Nonetheless, this novel still has a lot of potential and would recommend readers to give it a try 😁👌🏻

This story is very intriguing. I like how descriptive your writing is. It really helps with the imagery of both the characters and the setting. I see great potential in this story and will definitely keep reading! Great work, Author!

The beginning of this story is engaging and captivating. The pacing for the plot development is good and enjoyable to read. Keep up your good work!

I didn't realize that I've read this story before lol...the plots, the writing quality and the synopsis were good, I rarely find any mistakes which is a good job to the author👏🏻

The writing style is good and I can see the world building happening. I must say, the synopsis was extremely good though. It was enough to captivate the reader. But I think changing the book cover will get more traffic to this novel. This is just my thought but readers do look at the cover before thinking of stopping by and reading it. As for the content, I really liked it and will be looking forward to more chapters. Keep releasing and happy writing 🤗

This story is good. Thou, it's still fresh, will be waiting for more interesting chapters. Keep it up! The writing style is quite good and simple, easy flowing. More author more!

It’s really well done. I love the character’s passion, his drive is inspiring and makes the reader more interested in the plot and discovering more about the character and the character’s background. I wish there were more chapters, man- it’s a good read!