Reincarnated as the Son of Conglomerate

Shameless review from the author. I just found out that the desktop version has a rating system. Alright, I'll give you some FAQs. Q: Is mc a villain? A: No, he isn't. MC is more of a neutral character or an anti-hero. He is neither a bad guy nor a good guy. Q: Is there a harem? A: Honestly, I'm a little hesitant to answer this question. I put the harem tag because I plan to add a lot of female characters around the mc. But I'm not sure if they will have any interest on him. Q: Is there any romance? A: Yup. The cover of the novel is the female lead. If you have any other questions, please reply to this comment so I can answer them.

Everything was good until he started to hide. He of all people should know the importance of strength. like at least show an A rank of something but no, he wants to be the F rank underdog. Then comes his sister, someone so annoying that I threw my phone (literally)on the floor out of frustration. The characters feel bland with only one or so traits associated with them like the sister is annoying, the father is strict etc. Overall, I would say you should review all the work from a reader's viewpoint and rewrite this novel as the basic idea is a good one.

Honestly I decided to drop on the seventh chapter, but deciding to be fair to the author and write a better review I read further till the 20th something chapter. There is no thrill in the story, mc is extremely overpowered but plays the F rank underdog role for whatever reason, he is pushed around a lot by his sister and mom and has no ambition himself(very boring). There’s a lot of inconsistencies with the carachters design specifically his and the family members. With that out of the way, I think the grammar,update stability and creativity are very good, just the execution isn’t up to that standard(maybe why I’m beiing so rarsh)

Ok review time, Decent writing Quality Story development is bad for me atleast until now, I have read tons of low key hiding your power novels and honestly they are bs, if you really don't want people to step on you and can't take it just show A class talent but no we always have BS of F rank and when someone causes trouble for them due there rank it's faceslapping time. Bruh, just show a class power and avoid it if you don't like it. Forgive my rant. Character Design, well kind of good. You are find MC'S sister annoying af but well just look at her as an annoying child coz that's what she is And MC sometimes goes along with her wishes to show her the reality of the world somewhat. world Background, It's earth updates, dunno man, didn't check, it's regular ig, so good. Overall I feel it has potential but author just killing it for low-key bs

You know this whole making the main characters stats appear like bottom of the barrel when in actuality he’s amongst the strongest is pretty annoying people with a proper brain will make them appear average or a little above average not anything outstanding like c class or something

It has a lot of potential. But the mc has a very fickle personality, and ends up leaving the story inconsistent. The author presented him as someone cold and indifferent even before God, then he shows anger at situations that he puts himself in. The author makes him an opportunist, which honestly makes no sense, otherwise he would not suppress his power. Anyway, the story has a lot of potential, but it has many inconsistencies in relation to the mc's personality, his power and decisions.

Too many clichés, overused clichés ,but never mind this novel is author first time so

Another dumb and annoying MC who is OP but for SOME REASON, hides his power from everyone while being a pushover at the same time... Like seriously, how many stories have I read that have this setting? The only reason it worked in Eminence in Shadow is because the author/writer of that story set it up in a way that it doesn't annoy the reader or didn't used it to give trouble to the MC I have read WAY TOO MANY novels and stories where MC hides his powers and because of that, there are a lot of idiots going around giving him trouble just for it...it's just annoying...it was fun reading about it for the first few times, but when the same annoying cliche gets recycled over and over...it just becomes irritating THE TROPE OF AN OP MC THAT HIDES HIS POWER REALLY NEEDS TO FRICKING DIE... unless the author gives a good reason for it, the trope is just stupid

this story is the exact example of what I don't like. the main character is hopelessly overpowered and spoils his little sister, not letting her learn her lesson for her mistakes, treats enemies as ants and lets them do whatever they want until they directly fight him, is afraid of showing even his family members his power, is a total pushover, and let's his family walk all over him and spoil him too.there is nothing redeeming about him, the plot development is forced through his willful passiveness, a character trait that just doesn't make sense since its allowing his sister who he supposedly cares about reveal everything about her to the world and traipse into death traps on her whims. all of this without laying down any foundation for his character. this kind of thing only works for novels like eminence in the shadows because there's a secondary objective in the background, an actual reason to be willfully passive.these are the reasons I give story development a zero, character design is a 3 because ultimately its just your average wish granting without anything actually interesting, world background a 2 because it just isn't well developed and writing quality a 3, because while formatted fine and grammatically competent, there's just very little story being weaved and it has all been very pointlessly direct as far as I've read.since I haven't caught up I've left update stability at a 5, but don't be fooled, in my opinion this just isn't a good novel. however if you like all this or at least don't mind it feel free to give it a read, its not like there's glaring plot holes so far or badly translated pointless drivel. definitely not worth paying to unlock anything.

since my last review was deleted ill summarize. there is no subtlety, all characters have slightly above toddler level logic and reasoning, plot is always straightforward, main character is the most powerful man in the world and a pushover who acts completely different from how he's stated to be, he doesn't trust anybody not even family even though they aren't control freaks that would turn him in, blah, blah, blah. theres no engaged behind the scenes anything going on. no allusion to possible events. its grammatically fine, dialogue is organic enough if you ignore peoples level of intelligence being low with this universal juvenile personality disorder going on. its easier to count the few characters that have their own personality than the ones that basically hang on every word of the mc, all be it in a not so Chinese protagonist boot licking way. I've read around 30 chapters so far. low tier work, mid at best if you can get over intentionally passive op main characters that put their loved ones at risk for no reason other than their own arrogance.

A hidden gem. I thought it would be like any other system, but this novel has a unique theme and a cunning protagonist.

Jesus, man. Whenever someone leaves a negative review, you act like you’re taking it into consideration and say you’ll try to improve it, but you still don’t change a single thing about your story. No wonder so many people are dropping this.

uhh...great story and all but the way mc is portrayed as is kinda cringe. There's plenty of novels out there with mc hiding power to face slap or kill just cuz everyone thought he's weak. Story portrayed mc as a good guy just wanting to live life peacefully but the world turns and makes him evil. You see what irks me is that he gets a second life and has many chances to make it Betta, but he wants to go the og route, it just makes no sense. What's the point in a OP mc if he's hiding, and hiding from who?! he is so strong that he can legit destroy humanity but the way he thinks and do is weak mindset. there's plenty of better ways to be openly OP and still rock it, but ney. Good novel tho, just not my cup of tea.

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Bro, I reall like your work, keep up and continue doing so you are good at it,and i really like klaus character hope he get more character development throughout the novel🤗🤗

Where can I find novel like (prevented daddy System. ............ Pls tell me..............,..........................pls pliz tell me some novel like that

War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible (who cares, just give more women, money and fame, leave the rest to criminals who want peace, refuse to pay taxes or do not give up the cheap marijuana they bought from Thailand, the real world is not your playground poor people)

I am hooked. This has some great potential. The writing quality needs work but it's not bad. I enjoy the mc. He has room for growth but not in a negative way but in a way it makes me excited to see what his future will be as a person. There is some world background but so far its not much. It's still early tho so there is plenty of time. The story so far has been mainly focusing on the mc and his future plans. Over all I wish you would hurry with the chapters because I'm raring to read them

It's very early to tell if this is going to be good or not. I have read till the latest chapter and it's exceptionally well. [img=recommend][img=update]

The world building is quite good, however the what rate this down is the amounts of cliché in this story. The typical F Rank scenario, annoying siblings if this story wants to shine it needs to be different and new. It's interesting but at the same time very frustrating.