Pokemon- Jordan's Adventure

A starting writer that wrote a pokemon based topic (which is hard so critics are welcome) so i could improve some of my works that sitting in my laptop The story is about a kid from a clan that is said to be the protector of their home, Why does the kid want to be a strong trainer? who knows, What is the reason for the creation of his Group Let's Find Out shall WE -Pokemon Not MINE -FanFic