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One Piece: Whitebeard's Son

Penulis: Joyboy2023
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Baca novel One Piece: Whitebeard's Son yang ditulis oleh penulis Joyboy2023 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. This is a Translation of a One Piece fanfic I found, on a chinese raw websiteOriginal Author: Li Xiaojian Original Title: Pirates: Dad, Wait For MeAnd support the original author if you can find him, ...

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This is a Translation of a One Piece fanfic I found, on a chinese raw website Original Author: Li Xiaojian Original Title: Pirates: Dad, Wait For Me And support the original author if you can find him, sorry abt PLEASE GIVE ME POWER STONES!!!!!! AND NO, NOT FROM THANOS GAUNTLET!!!! "Kid, why are you following me?" "Because if I follow you, I can fill my stomach and no one will bully me!" "Then, let's carry the name of Laozi and brave the sea!" … A young child met Whitebeard, who had just joined the Rocks Pirate. From then on, there was one less beggar and one less thief in the world! There is another man with a monster-like body! Countless years later, when the war came, a huge figure appeared! "Don't get me wrong, everyone! I don't want to kill you. The purpose of my coming here is just to bring my father and several incompetent brothers home!" plz support me on my p_atreon, your $1 is really appreciated p_atreon.com/JoyBoyTheSun

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You need to work on the grammar, lots of he/she mistakes, wrong names and so on

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Honestly pretty good start, nice introduction and I really enjoyed the reasons for the MC's personality, as it's often ignored in stories like this one. A few touch ups needed on the writing, but nothing too distracting. Great work! Looking forwards to the rest of this story...

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