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New Viltrumite in MCU

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Baca novel New Viltrumite in MCU yang ditulis oleh penulis A_Vylet yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. A young man stuck in the viltrumite body in space with a broken communicator. Will he get lucky, or starve to death before he finds a new planet?...

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A young man stuck in the viltrumite body in space with a broken communicator. Will he get lucky, or starve to death before he finds a new planet?

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MY LOVE IS MY BIGGEST ENEMY

"mom Please don't go " SAHAR screamed for her leaving mother who was going to marry to another man after divorce . SAHAR was crying outside her house. Her father was living in another CITY P so SAHAR went to meet her father after her mother betrayal. "DAD ! do you still love MOM" "YEAH" ......Her father said . "why do you love more than she does.she even betray you over that MAN" "SHE IS IN LOVE ! MY CHILD . Everything is fair in LOVE." --father said "EVEN BETRAYAL"---painful SAHAR asked her father. " ITS MY MISTAKE TO NOT MAKE HER FALL IN LOVE WITH ME " ---Father said.... Father ZHOUNEIL said ---SAHAR , tell me --- IF you LOVE & TRUST Someone whole heartedly but the someone special broke your heart and trust what will you do with him....? SAHAR :--that was last day of our love and relationship. I will never forgive him. Father ZHOUNEIL :--The BETRAYAL will kill your heart. (tears fell down from his eyes) SAHAR comforted his father with tightly hug. 'I PROMISE FATHER ,I WILL NEVER BETRAY ANYONE AND BECAME LIKE YOU.' Abruptly Her father said----"NO , Don't be like me ever"...... CITY P : XUO COMPANY EVAN :----I will do everything for MY XUO business....I will break my words ,deals,and trust for my success too...... Smith :---did you betray me and my company ? You lair ! you bug ! you cheated us. EVAN:-- MR SMITH !.......I like to win by HOOK OR BY CROOK.For my company & Success I will sacrifice a prey like you. when A man is showing his little body in front of Shark that would be last day of his life.....and yeah !one more thing I am not saint here in businesses who will not betray you. (smirk) SO EVERYONE BE CAREFUL TO ME & MY BETRAYALS.......I AM BACK TO CITY P. MEETING ADJOURNED..... After saying this XUO EVAN left the Entertainment group meeting of country X. ......... So this is howThis novel based on LOVE , Trust, Faith , relationships & betrayal .....FOR know about more what happened to SAHAR ' s parents and what will happen when SAHAR met EVAN....... stick to this novel.... give a chance me & my novel ..... Keep voting.... respectable comments in words... AUTHOR @KLNC_LV

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EvilBlueCrystal
EvilBlueCrystalLv1EvilBlueCrystal

The protagonist doesn't have any goals, he is not that interesting or unique, he lacks memorable introduction, he is without distinct personality, special qualities or traits. His desire is to explore the world or universe and engage in missions which is not that original or captivating. He is not intelligent either as he freely reveals information about himself and his strengths, without any semblance of strategic thinking or hidden agenda, and his abilities, which consist of being strong and immune to various things, are far from unique. While the writing may be good and the chapters are long, the story itself is boring, lacking any standout moments, elements to pique the reader's interest, or an engaging and gradual storyline, instead of thrusting the protagonist into an instant galactic race and mundane missions, it would have been more intriguing to see them explore a small, unfamiliar planet starting his journey to become stronger as a villain.

In_destructible
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Sasha_Reaper
Sasha_ReaperLv2Sasha_Reaper

Great start. Great grammar. Very much looking forward to seeing the development of the plot.

Darkiling
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1lazy_loner
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Mad_Governor
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daniel_lucas
daniel_lucasLv14daniel_lucas

for just two chapters this is a great start so far can't wait to read the next one and see how the story progresses

A_Vylet
A_VyletPenulisA_Vylet

Feel free to tell me if I made any mistakes, as English is not my first language. ^^

Rudeus_6784
Rudeus_6784Lv2Rudeus_6784

This is good...keep it up :D .. chapters lengths are good too........................................................................................

Apathy_Personified
Apathy_PersonifiedLv4Apathy_Personified

An interesting novel, that's all i can say. Author!!! Bring me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1malinizgeldii

the novel is great. first of all, his perspective on the marvel universe as an ff is beyond amazing. an ff that isn't stuck in the world like EVERY other ff. We can get news from anywhere in the universe. Even xander is included in the novel. Although there are still 6 episodes, it did not immediately go and connect to the shield. normally they are all immediately connected to the shield. This novel is very good in every way. so start reading.

Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

is this a harem. ?

Random_Entity
Random_EntityLv4Random_Entity

This is the best viltrimite novel I have ever seen. Please at least get this up to 20 chapters. ……………………………………………………………………………….. …………………………. …………………….

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