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New Place, New name

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Sarah is reincarnated into a new world where magic and monsters are real but her life turns upside-down as she has restrictions to her power. The system restricts her from some privileges but she has to grow even with the impartiality. In the end, she gathers herself a team and breaks the system proving that the impossible is possible.

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Jilid 2 :Wellington's Betrayal
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SabergKeys
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Okay, I don't want to offend you but I'll give my honest review. And I'll give you some few tips on how to improve. (I'm not a professional writer, but I'll do my best to give some tips.) Synopsis - needs some work, it's really short and doesn't pull in readers, I suggest you read some other people's synopsis so that you'll understand how to create one. Chapters - The length of the chapters are too short and very quick, make it longer maybe up to 1500 - 2000 words are okay so that you'll pull in readers. Story - The entire magic system is a mess, it doesn't explain how and why the MC got those skills except for the MC defeating some monsters. Need some work on how the skill system functions. The story is to fast paced and almost has no narration or dialogues, which is a huge PROBLEM⚠️. You need to thoroughly explain everything about what the characters are doing or else it wouldn't make sense from the readers point of view. Remember to not lump in many information or else it could be off putting to readers to remember the skills of the MC, and make sure to do something so that your loyal readers would be fascinated of the MC's skills. Due to the fast-paced story, there'd no character development at all and the world building is not that good, so I suggest to update some of the chapters. Names - I suggest to not use words like Google or Magicules because they're already taken by people who created them, change them quickly or else there will be consequences if someone reported your book. I know that you are inspired by isekai animes especially That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime, you write something similar but not too similar maybe change some part of the words used, or how they obtained skills, or some other things. Overall, if you want to improve I suggest you to read many novels so that you would understand how to write one, how to develop characters, how to do world-building and many more. Because you'll learn by reading a lot.

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