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Naruto: Rebirth in the Ninja World

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What is Naruto: Rebirth in the Ninja World

Baca novel Naruto: Rebirth in the Ninja World yang ditulis oleh penulis Mathematical_Pi yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. This is the story about a person who used to live in modern world rebirthed in the ninja world.Having watched a lot of anime in his previous life on earth, he knew a lot about the ninja world but, wha...

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This is the story about a person who used to live in modern world rebirthed in the ninja world. Having watched a lot of anime in his previous life on earth, he knew a lot about the ninja world but, what if everything he knew wasn't correct? What if there were entirely different outcomes for a small change he made? ------------------------ This is a rewrite of my previous work, "Swordsman System in Naruto". I have this time tried to correct all my previous wrongs and make the story a lot better. Try reading it once before you make a review or something. Also, just ask me if there is something you don't understand, just ask me. Hit me up on Discord for anything related to the story or me : overlord#0103

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Mathematical_Pi
Mathematical_PiPenulisMathematical_Pi

This is, what you may think, the famous, Author Review. Here, in short I would like to answer some questions people may have before reading. 1. No, I did not put the tags wrong, there is NOT going to be any harem. 2. Romance is not the main focus of this story. 3. Everything in here has a reason for it to happen, nothing is happening without any connection in future. So if you can, trust me through some absurd things in between. 4. I have considered about the emotional approach of the MC a lot more. I have tried to portray him as a normal human who isn't perfect and may need help from his friends. 5. He is no goody-two shoes or the Hokage's dog. MC could give lesser f's about Konoha. He only stays here and defends it since his mother lives there and he loves her a lot. (A normal mother-son love. Don't ask that question) 6. As for the relations, those who have already read it in the previous work, please do not spoil it for the new ones (If there are any). 7. Lastly, Yup, Naruto will indeed take birth but not as the MC's son. 8. Ask me any other questions you have in the comment section in chaps, here or on my discord. Username is given in the story description.

WiseHermit
WiseHermitLv4WiseHermit

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Yuki_1
Yuki_1Lv11Yuki_1

Oh my God, there is no harem. I love you because there is no harem I will begin with the readers now, but 5 stars for you because there is no harem

Random_0P_Being
Random_0P_BeingLv1Random_0P_Being

What's the point of timeskip when you make 5,6 chapter's explaining the skip😐 Gfdudhgfgyggyhgggghyyghhgghhgghhgggghhhhggghhhhgghhhffhh

ReadFalcon
ReadFalconLv4ReadFalcon

Writing quality is decent but template system power scaling is always a little flawed and limits character development. But if you like template system fics, then give this a read, as it is better than most.

Papa_Chef
Papa_ChefLv4Papa_Chef

Second review to counter act the first guy's three star lol

The_Puffer
The_PufferLv13The_Puffer

Just gotta say. It is too forced. Mc's Mother dies because he is too stupid. There was a lot of way to save her but mc needed his character development...

Lifah_12
Lifah_12Lv13Lifah_12

The third review, copying the 2nd to counter 1st review.

CODE_XY
CODE_XYLv1CODE_XY

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FringGustavo
FringGustavoLv13FringGustavo

using this review to counter the fake reviews cause this book is not bad..................................................................................

OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv13OVERKILL

i find this boring . i couldn't attach to the MC . i dropped this twice and in two days . now i don't remember anything about the story

The_Square_Squad
The_Square_SquadLv12The_Square_Squad

I really didn't like this book. It was just barely good enough to keep reading until the end and nothing really changes from the original story. The templates were not explored well and neither was his mother's clan. I think you should stop writing this and just start something new.

CyberBlancaX
CyberBlancaXLv3CyberBlancaX

Ima be honest here and say this. I may seem like I'm putting a review in here really early, afterall, I'm only 2 chapters in, but, there is just one thing I had to put in here that the author keeps doing. Please...PLEASE stop repeating your words so much. This is just advice from a fellow writer(although I don't really publish) and put some more personality into your characters. From what I can see, they're just generic with a basic face. What I mean by that is, for example, Yukan, the MC, is a bit flat and for the beginning of your story, that ain't a good sign. He has the all round, cliché sad backstory and even though he has a system, I feel that he's not really utilizing and exploring much of it...first of all, how did he get the template?(Probably explained later, right?) Second, another useful tip I learned, stop extending your paragraphs and sentences. There are way to many unnecessary words put into it, and rather than interesting, it makes it tedious to read. If you put into your sentence "Konoha was at peace once the battle was over" you don't need to continue adding afterwards 'The children were running around in happiness after the war ended.' It's repetitive and both still give off the same message, just in different words.

Craterzech3
Craterzech3Lv3Craterzech3

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TIFOEL
TIFOELLv1TIFOEL

Я просто не могу читать дальше... 78 глав, я читал с большим трудом. Герой очень... пассивный? В общем не пытается. Он мог бы стать медиком... что за ерунда с талантом? Просто трудись и все... нет он полагается на систему. Вообще система это самый большой минус этого фанфика. был бы странный геном они было бы лучше, как и мечник, нет ничего что нельзя было сделать в рамках силы мира Наруто. Но самое плохое было в непонятном ориентировании на героя злодеев. Данзо психопат, а этого НЕ БЫЛО в каноне. Он был лживым но не убийцей своих без КРАЙНЕЙ необходимости. Учихи готовили переворот в деревне... конечно он решит их уничтожить, это логично. Но это не было поступком психопата, он был высокомерным идиотом с жаждой власти но не психом!

EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv12EyeOfSilver

Honest review 5 stars author is not english so give him a break on the grammar, and the writing is good the only downside is the super slow template, understand if author nerfed it due to kijin physique but it feels like it wont develop until 200 chaps later but i do hope its not like that because it would be nice if he unlocks other templates too.

NiceReviewer
NiceReviewerLv4NiceReviewer

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joe_caa
joe_caaLv2joe_caa

This is your second attempt to correct the inconsistencies from the last fic you wrote and lemme tell you that you absolutely blew it. I suggest you to find another hobby or passion cuz writing stories is bot for you

Jordi_Hardiansyah
Jordi_HardiansyahLv1Jordi_Hardiansyah

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itz_scaro
itz_scaroLv13itz_scaro

I really like this novel, the only thing preventing me from giving it full stars is the mc and kushina's relationship, still a good read, thank you author.

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