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Naruto : Raijin

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Baca novel Naruto : Raijin yang ditulis oleh penulis MorbidCuriosity yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Ken is your average 18 year old lost and unsure what to do with his life. He watches a lot of television and one of the show he watched was Naruto. He really thought nothing of it, great show to pass ...

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Ken is your average 18 year old lost and unsure what to do with his life. He watches a lot of television and one of the show he watched was Naruto. He really thought nothing of it, great show to pass the time. What happens next shocked him to the core.

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After Getting Abandoned, I Choose to Become the General’s Wife

In the hospital, Fang Ya lay on the cold bed. As she did not have the money for surgery, she could only watch as her life slowly faded away. On her deathbed, looking back on her life, she relived all of her regrets. What she regretted the most was that she had chosen to leave her marriage with nothing and refused all the assets given to her by her nouveau riche ex-husband. Darkness enveloped her. When she woke again, she found herself reborn. She was reborn in the year when her nouveau riche ex-husband abandoned her and making ends meet with their daughter. She could not believe it. She had once prayed to God, and God seemed to have answered her prayers—He gave her a second chance! This time, she did not reject the property distribution from her nouveau riche ex-husband. She took the nine-digit sum of money as well as a set of courtyard houses in the capital city. In this life, she would give her daughter a luxurious life. They would no longer be homeless and destitute. She would no longer have to give up her life because she had no money. Not long after the divorce, she met He Feng coincidentally. At this time, He Feng had just returned from the European battlefield. He returned home with dazzling military achievements, only to receive a divorce agreement from his wife. In the few years that he was on the battlefield, his wife had already fallen in love with someone else, and that person was rather rich too. He Feng brought his child to the city where Fang Ya was working and took up a position in the Public Security Department. Someone introduced him to Fang Ya and wanted to matchmake them. Fang Ya, who was reborn, knew He Feng's entire life experience. In a few decades, he would be a five-star admiral with immense power and battle achievements. Moreover, after the divorce, he never remarried. It was said that he was hurt by love. His loyalty would not allow him to trust any other woman. During the blind date, the tall and stern man appeared to be a little taciturn. Fang Ya knew that He Feng only planned to remarry because of his child. He did not want his child to follow him everywhere on his military travels. Once he settled down, he probably would not even consider marriage anymore. Without much hesitation, Fang Ya agreed. He Feng was a good man and was worth marrying. Female protagonist: Reincarnated in her later years and experienced all the vicissitudes of life. After marriage, she assisted the male protagonist to overcome obstacles based on memories from her past life. She also assisted him to ascend to the peak of power smoothly. The male protagonist: An ordinary man who was a member of the special forces. From the most ordinary soldier, he transformed into a man who eventually became the general of the Empire.

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398 Chs

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Millicent Owen believed the world would only accept you when you're smart so she studied day and night trying to be the best academically. She falls in love with Davy Kent in highschool, her classmate studying to one day start up his own business. Davy promised to get married to her and make her the manager of his company. On their seventh year anniversary which was also their graduation day at college, Davy proposes a break up leaving her heartbroken. Three years later, Millicent found out the company she had applied for belonged to Davy Kent but she needed the job to save up for her mother's surgery but Davy believed it was her scheme to get him back. He employed her being the most qualified but was extremely harsh on her but she didn't mind. Working with him resurfaced old feelings but she had to stay strong. Millicent finds new love interest in a friend and coworker Zack Griffo who happened to feel the same for her but a part of her still longed for Davy. Her other friend kiara Lynn starts to fall for her as well and it was up to Millicent to decide who she wanted. Along the way, having his ex girlfriend around so often made Davy regret the action he took three years ago and he decides to to his possible best to win her heart back.... Millicent was stuck in the middle of three love interests and had a hard time deciding as they all proposed their feelings on the same day. Who would she choose..........

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Anthony_Marte
Anthony_MarteLv4Anthony_Marte

I tried to enjoy it the premise is okay I supposed but the grammar is killing me and I can’t really get immersed also at the beginning he’s put into the body of a child but he can’t pass a entrance exam at the academy??

WoahBuddy
WoahBuddyLv1WoahBuddy

I've read through chapter ten. It's neither great nor bad. It's an average fanfic. I'd say the biggest issue for the author is dialogue (Q&A) and descriptions (environment, characters, expressions, etc.). The author makes the core focus of the story the training, but it's all ambiguous. Some parts of the story should be cut out (filler). It's a decent 3/5. For Naruto fanfics, I recommend "The Outsider's Resolve," "The Blind Swordsman," and "The Gamer Ninja" as references that might help better your own story.

MorbidCuriosity
MorbidCuriosityPenulisMorbidCuriosity

This is the author, this is my first time writing and i know its kinda hard to read but as the story progresses i will try make this novel better and improve my writing.

MorbidCuriosity
MorbidCuriosityPenulisMorbidCuriosity

I have completely overhauled the writing and grammar and if you all who have already read this novel you guys can reread. If you want too. I will update the novel soon give me some time. Fixing grammar on both of my books was a pain.

Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1Chaddts

The author is using some kind of a.i to correct his writing. I'm not sure to what extent this is a.i written, but most of the descriptive paragraphs are entirely a.i., i.m.o Also, everything is very vague when it's described. And much of the story is told and not shown. There are other issues as well, pertaining to continuity. For instance he gets a job, and then he gets some tools, and training, from the boss, and then nothing about it is ever mentioned again. The story is also rushed. There is no real character building for his teammates or anyone else. Too much is glossed over as well, and simply not explained. It's very jarring. This needs a lot of work and for the author to reword everything is his own words instead of using the a.i to write.

MarkinHotties
MarkinHottiesLv12MarkinHotties

Its a nice story but like other reviews just needs better grammar to fully function, i suggest putting these chapters on grammarly and it will fix most of these mistakes.

Jordi_Hardiansyah
Jordi_HardiansyahLv1Jordi_Hardiansyah

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