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Living in the past

Penulis: Zeton
Martial Arts
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What is Living in the past

Baca novel Living in the past yang ditulis oleh penulis Zeton yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. This a story of a well known billionare who somehow travels in pastNow that he is in the past, he tries to figure out how did he get here,why did he get here?And not only that but also he has to deal ...

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This a story of a well known billionare who somehow travels in past Now that he is in the past, he tries to figure out how did he get here,why did he get here? And not only that but also he has to deal with the same discrimination,torture and bully that he had faced as a child except now he knows what's gonna happen to him So will he be able to endure the same treatment and become billionaire again by starting his own company and shut everyone's mouth again but with a twist.Also figure out how he got here OR He will lose it all and end up destroying everything he has built and not being able to become a billionare again and find out the secret.His life will end up as cheap and will make everyone's insulting assumptions right Not only that he will also have to face through the delinquint stuff,gang wars,family issues, bullying, school life

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God Source is about a boy named Cato who lives on the Continent, Terra. Terra is home to six deities, Mountain, Nature, Fire, Ocean, Demon, and Beast. These deities grant their subjects powers through contracts, allowing their subjects to use a portion of the deity's true power. However, some deities are restless and expecting war. Will Cato have enough time to become a warrior to save his family and friends? Or will he walk a path of revenge, forever alone, never to experience true joy again? Read to find out. P.S. I recommend reading until 'The Ceremony' before dropping the story:) EXCERPT: As I touched the red gemstone, my body launched into a tunnel. It felt like one of the tunnels I would walk through every day to get to the town square, but something was off. The sconces on the wall were different colored flames, some red, some blue, some white, and some even green. I wasn't walking, yet I was gliding through the tunnel. I continued to speed up until the sconces turned into bright blurs in my vision. 'I wonder what that huge noise was outside? Nobody has attacked the Fire Tribe in years; it couldn't have been an attack, right?' My thoughts raced as I thought about where Blaze and Angelica might have been in the line. 'Well, let's hope that they already completed their ceremony. Hell, Blaze could be a True Power Wielder by now, and I wouldn't even know it,' I tried to calm myself with anything I could think of as I raced by the now solid line of changing colors. When I finally came to the end of the tunnel, it spat me out onto a never-ending expanse of the color red. The horizon glowed a brighter red while, what should have been the sky above me, was a dark maroon providing little light. The floor was the most interesting. It seemed as if it were stained the color it was—a dark, unsightly red. I tried to move around in this infinite box I had been transported to, and to my surprise, I could. I stretched my arms out above my head and realized I was still holding onto the crystal. 'Well, it couldn't hurt to have this, I guess.' I stuffed the gem in my pocket and continued to move forward. Whatever forward even meant in an endless abyss. It also did not help that the tunnel put me here and as quickly left me behind. I studied the floor more with nothing else to do. I pushed my index finger into it and was met with solid resistance. When I dragged my finger across the floor, it picked up a line of crusted red that had stained the floor. I brought it to my nose and came to one conclusion; Blood. This never-ending expanse, someone had coated it in blood. As if reading my thoughts, a commanding voice resounded behind me, "Yes, it's blood, any other questions?"

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FREAKKETTONE
FREAKKETTONELv12FREAKKETTONE

A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.

Ready_
Ready_Lv4Ready_

So far, so good, In the first chapters some may be repulsed by a very bizarre way of writting that they wouldn't be used to reading at all but I would recommend to stick around as the author makes fast progress as they write each chapters, of course, there are grammatical mistake but every story has them, the plot progresses at a good space, nor too fast nor too slow, in short, I would recommend you stick around and give this novel a read!

appricotblossom
appricotblossomLv2appricotblossom

The story plot is really creative, i could really enjoy the way the story was going, but it's a bit confusing sometimes due to some manor grammatical errors. The author is doing well, you have my encouragement. Work hard, and you'll only get better and better.

BeeInAPan
BeeInAPanLv1BeeInAPan

Very creative! I'm not a big romance type person but the writing stile is very nice. I also love how it starts right away into action and the aspect that the character repeats different timeliness over and over again!

McWms99
McWms99Lv2McWms99

I'll say this, the story is interesting as far as the whole narrative beats and everything but the grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation hold this story back heavily. If the author can clean that up. I think the novel will be even more enjoyable.

CultivationKing
CultivationKingLv1CultivationKing

Very good story! Gripping intro and very nice flow of conversation. Rameez is a likeable character that I can kinda relate to. The interactions between characters is my favourite part of the novel.

M_Babe_qout
M_Babe_qoutLv2M_Babe_qout

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Mysterious_fairy
Mysterious_fairyLv1Mysterious_fairy

Woah......time travel , my all time favourite. I always love a good time travel story . I would love to see how things play out for him . Can't wait for more chapters to be out . You have my support 🤗

Sporanium
SporaniumLv1Sporanium

The way the author write is kinda unique, using himself as a narrator and describing the situation work. But it's confusing on it's own, the way the author use punctuation is a mess. And too much "tell" that make it bland. But the story was good, the concept of revenge are neatly arranged with nerdy past of mc. Overall, it's decent to read.

Ramia_Riasat
Ramia_RiasatLv1Ramia_Riasat

This man got skills in writing Brilliant efforts!! The plot of story the characters The emotions The feelings Everything felt soo accurate.! The story is pretty suspenseful which is quite fun to read Love on your work from my side Waiting for the continuation

Itsurbff_who_reads
Itsurbff_who_readsLv2Itsurbff_who_reads

This book starts off very quickly and that’s a really cool concept. it’s also very cool how the MC goes back in time instead of the normal transmigration. Very creative and unique concept! The world building is great as is the character design. Overall it’s very good though I‘d recommend editing your previous chapters to improve them. (you could maybe try grammerly) Otherwise it’s a very good book! 😊

Homeless_Traveler
Homeless_TravelerLv1Homeless_Traveler

While the idea behind the story is good, it pains me to say that the poor writing quality makes it unenjoyable. There are too many dialogues, but we have no idea about how the character feels, what they were doing, or what's the situation surrounding them. It lacks proper explanation. This work might be more appropriate as a theater script. Also, as I've mentioned in many of my reviews, proper punctuation is important. Thats what makes a sentence can be easily comprehended. If the author makes no visible improvement in the future, I'm afraid I can't go on reading this. Sorry.

ronysa786
ronysa786Lv5ronysa786

cliche novel y don't u write about something real ok.kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk alllllllllllllllll theeeeeeeeee bestttttttttrrttrrrtrttt

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