Konoha:Opening Sign In to Rinnegan {Naruto Fanfiction}

I personally don't like chinese fanfics about naruto, what i hate most about them are the name mistakes, once i tried to read it and i didn't understand anything, because the names were in chinese and i didn't recognize the portrayed characters The author here corrected the names, so 5 stars, a lot of people think it's bad, but for those who don't have what to read, it's fun

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the story is very interesting, but the grammar doesn't help... you can hardly understand it. .

difficult to read and the meaning is lost.......................................................................................................................................

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So only on chapter two and have lost count of how many spelling mistakes there are I really don’t like to bring down authors like this but please get grammarly or something

this is probably one of my favorites and people will say it's bad because of the translator but I like it I wouldn't say it became worse because 10% of the story was a spelling mistake🤣😁👍 but I like it so please make some more chapters and remember we're here to support YOU author remember that and also here's some cookies.

don't read unless you're willing to suffer bad translation errors. seriously. hdhdhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjfjdjjddjdjdjdjdjddjjdjddjdjfjfjfjfjdjddjjd

welp is a good story the gramatic is poor but is understandable

Translation are not understandable. It is difficult to read. ......................................................................................

Story is very Bad and difficult to read,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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I have a request. This overall fanfiction isn't bad, if its tweaked a bit with more clearer english, it will be a fun to read fanfic. Am I allowed to edit these chapters into a more clearer and gramatical english. Another bit, could I then post the edited fanfic. You will be credited but yh. If you don't like it, I don't mind, its just that this fanfic could get more love if it wasn't just machine translated

My brain actually hurts... get either a translator or a editor, or download Grammarly for free, or even just Ctrl C + Ctrl V it into Google docs, it will do wonders, I speak fluent English and still use Grammarly. honestly at this point the only thing that is fluid in the story is the genders of the characters he she idk anymore I am actually going to perish.

Borderline unreadable .................................................................... ..................................... .......... ..... .

I think the story is pretty good but unfortunately it's a mess, why? That's because part of the story focuses on the butterfly effect, so when I read it I felt that the MC was just a side character With a strong power or a strong system so my impression for the MC is that it's average and nothing interesting, and also I'm still confused about the purpose of MC? Why is he hiding I mean hiding his power is it because of black zetsu? If it's true, why not just delete it, right? Easy? Well, that's just my personal opinion, if there are harsh words, I'm sorry, just keep up the story

its so bad that even when i shut down my brain still cant read it

Its disappointing i lower my expectation to the lowest but it was still disappointing

TRASSSSSSSSHHHHHHHH Read other reviews if you want to know why i rate it as trash! i don't feel like explaining RN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

An annoying MTL translation. Every other line is “Courting death!”, “As expected of ____”, “Shameless!”, etc. The MC constantly flexes is power level and makes illogical decisions. He just likes to show off, then he lets his enemies go for no reason. The dialogue is cringe-worthy, the storyline makes zero sense, and nothing happens.