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King of the east universe

Penulis: samadetuyi
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Baca novel King of the east universe yang ditulis oleh penulis samadetuyi yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. he is the king of the east universe and he as to protect the east universe with his friends and his father if he fails then the east universe is doomed...

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he is the king of the east universe and he as to protect the east universe with his friends and his father if he fails then the east universe is doomed

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The billionaire loves his ex-wife(after they have divorced)

James marvel is a business tycoon, his also ruthless nd cruel his feared by all. His nt interested in any woman,he feels women r evil nd liars. One faithful night James was drugged in a room nd when he woke up he saw a girl beside him he was shaking in anger. Nancy willson was adopted by a foster family they never love her as their own they only saw her as a tool to climb up to a higher social status when they heard that James grandfather (Mr Eddy Marvel) was looking for a wife for his 26years old son, they decided to set their adopted daughter up, they drugged her and took her to the room were James was drugged and created a scene and left. Nany woke up the next morning only to realize that she was in a room with a stranger when she looked beside her she saw a handsome man looking at her with an intense look,she couldn't explain because she doesn't know how she got there while still in her thought she heard a loud voice telling her to ' GET OUT OF HERE'. When Mr eddy found out about this he decided to wed both of them to together. After a year they got divorced, Nancy left the country and came back as a business woman . On their first meeting James couldn't help but stare at her till the meeting was over. After a year of their marriage James realized that he loved her deeply enough not to let her go again. So what do you think will happen will she go back to her ex-husband or decide to move on with her life. Chapter 1 dropping soon

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

This story has potential by the way. But at least make it more lengthy or don't come short below 800 words. I recommend it to have between 1.5 to 800 words to make the flow of the story to be slower and its pacing will improve. What I do to mine was don't fall on 1000 words. But hey! your story is so awesome! A big wave of readers will come for your novel in the future!

Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyLv12Little_Foxxy

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

Temmy_Adetuyi
Temmy_AdetuyiLv1Temmy_Adetuyi

I like the book and I also feel connected to the characters the world-building also make me feel like I am there when I read the book I enjoy it

uhjuihoijio
uhjuihoijioLv1uhjuihoijio

I think the story definitely has potential. I can see the world and the characters been built. I would just suggest the use of more paragraphs and punctuation to improve the flow of the story. But overall good job. Keep at it :D

CalypsoDay
CalypsoDayLv1CalypsoDay

The story has a good start. You do have to work a bit more on your writing skills. I would've liked if the chapters were a bit longer, but that's not something to seriously worry about. Some paragraphs don't start with capital letters, and in my opinion, you should correct that. There are also a few grammatical errors, though nothing serious. Pay a bit more attention and your writing will definitely improve. Keep it up!

Wolfgirl1215
Wolfgirl1215Lv2Wolfgirl1215

I think this story has strong world building and a lot of promising description. Its very fun to read, though there are a few grammatical errors, I just wish there were longer chapters!

Limpin_Technocat
Limpin_TechnocatLv3Limpin_Technocat

good going so far, the story is promising. XD seeing a lot of rookie mistakes though, like breaking up the paragraphs properly and grammar, but it doesn't take away from the book. Fix these mistakes and you'll go far

Susan001
Susan001Lv1Susan001

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