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Penulis: asdsdaasd
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Baca novel judsuias yang ditulis oleh penulis asdsdaasd yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. "In order to keep everyone secure, vengeance is required. Although I may have been your slave, who is the slave now?""As cleaning is currently your only goal, my dear father, I really do hope you like...

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"In order to keep everyone secure, vengeance is required. Although I may have been your slave, who is the slave now?" "As cleaning is currently your only goal, my dear father, I really do hope you like it!" *Whip, Whip* "Oh father, you're so filthy. You ought to be cleaning, not making everything dirtier."

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The Return of Mysterious Ms Jones

"look at who is back home? where did this bad luck come from?" Madam Snotch asked "mommy are you still asking about this? hahaa she is trying to look pitiful for brother" the sister -in-law said. "let me tell you? you have to know where you are standing, this is my house and I can do whatever thing I want to do with you. you married my son because you knew from the start he is a wealthy man from a wealthy family, but let me tell you you choose the wrong family" she said "Mom, sister what have I done today to make you judge me like this? haven't I been a good daughter to you?" Becky asked. "I don't want you here? we don't need you...! done enough? what have you done if not bringing bad luck we are wealthy we don't welcome opportunist here...! pack your things and go, my son has a girlfriend and a wife who is fit enough to be his bride and go in any occasions with him" she said "mom, you said pack? what did she even came here with if not for that torn sandals, she will come out of this place with nothing " the sister said "okay let me take my staffs only" she said ******** have been married into this family for years yet this is what I get? all the new deals they won, were because I allowed them to, let me see how this rich family will survive without me. but first I have to divorce him forever. ********* will the Snotch regret ever being mean to Becky? will the husband Xavier Snotch regret not paying attention to her and seeing her as a burden and bad luck?..... ~~~~~~, let's wait and see, welcome to my new story.....

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Lawrence_Oshim
Lawrence_OshimLv4Lawrence_Oshim

Nice story, nice setting, plot and all that, very intriguing also buy almost not to easy to understand, either ways the book is good 👍to the author

VoidCeremonist
VoidCeremonistLv1VoidCeremonist

Pretty interesting setting and character. The english quality is readable and the world seems interesting. Although it is sometimes a little confusing to read as you don’t use paragraphs as often. I think the strongest point of your story right now is the plot, as it makes the reader wonder about what will happen next.

WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryLv1WorthyAdversary

A pretty good novel. The writing quality is pretty okay, with pretty good English, although the author tends to write a lot of run on sentences and has a few dependent clauses just hanging there. The stability of updates and story development are fine, although I really can't judge them that much right now due to the newness of the novel. Character design is the best part of the novel, with the MC being a pretty in depth character with a lot of duality to him. World background, like the stability of updates and the story development is pretty fine, generic, not anything new yet, so 4 across the board except for character design, which is a 5.

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