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Journey of the Wand less Mage

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What is Journey of the Wand less Mage

Baca novel Journey of the Wand less Mage yang ditulis oleh penulis avataroftheking yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. DeathThe end of everything for everyone, but not for Mirai who luckily met the Goddess from her favorite game SIGMA. The poor nerdy girl died from a meaningless hostage taking, yet reincarnated to liv...

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Death The end of everything for everyone, but not for Mirai who luckily met the Goddess from her favorite game SIGMA. The poor nerdy girl died from a meaningless hostage taking, yet reincarnated to live life again. "My life was kinda worthless so lemme give this reincarnation thing a shot!"

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Asher Dawn, Continuing.

This is the continuing of the book called Asher Dawn, please read it before you continue. Also there are a few misconceptions in the old book because I had just started out with it so I ask that when you see a hole in the plot, do point it out. Thank you for reading. A girl stuck in a rewinding journey with a crazy spirit bound to her soul and a lot of seals keeping her from reaching her fullest potential seeks out ways to rid her of not only her seal but the spirit that had come with the broken ability of hers. On her way to the Academy to learn more of her newly gained abilities she meets a silent man that seems to know what's hidden even if he doesn't see it. A sarcastic and funny girl who would usually be quite around everyone and everybody she meets and another boy that seemed dead set on keeping his secret. But..... each and every one of these three have their own darkness and secrets, so along with Asher how long will their secrets last and what are they? Thrilling battles of swords, firearms, magic and spiritual prowers are about to explode some Asher is aware of but most are unexpected and twisting. Release Schedule is chaotic. Since I'm working on another I will release during Fridays, sometimes seven to eight chapters. So stick around and see what's about to come. Oh and my very own novel, not a Fanfiction I am the original creator of Asher Dawn and I will stay the original creator. Obviously. https://discord.gg/5XWjpJ

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waspish
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It's been an enjoyable light read so far, though not captivating. The world background seems a bit weak, not because it needs info dump (please spare us from that), but because of the lack of interaction with the other characters. 'Show, don't tell' is good but apart from the quests they provide, her friend and her mother might as well not exist. Lots of mistakes in the first chapters (he/she), though it gets better later. A proof-reader would do wonders I suppose.

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ShuttleClock
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This one seem to be inspired by advent of the archmage, but have the same(kinda) system with night ranger, thought currently the begining have the same patern with advent of the archmage, i hope in the future the story will become more solid and unique, and if there are something to complain that's is update rate, at least make it 3ch or 4ch per week. Sorry for my bad english, and i will change my rating as the story progress. And if possible make summon or contract as a thing.

JustAnotherPerson
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This story is meets the standards for now. But, the quality of writing could be better. You also need more experience with writing a story. A more detailed character design and plot would be also be good. We should also, get a better understanding of the world in the near future. But, I like this story a lot, so please continue and remember, this is your first story so just try to improve and grow. Good luck, I'll be rooting for you.☺️👍📖

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