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infinite wishs in the omniverse fan fic version

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What is infinite wishs in the omniverse fan fic version

Baca novel infinite wishs in the omniverse fan fic version yang ditulis oleh penulis ghost_316x yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. its story about a guy who's life was always against him and his luck is always bad but then after He died then he encountered reality who offered him a deal so check out what he done after that ______...

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its story about a guy who's life was always against him and his luck is always bad but then after He died then he encountered reality who offered him a deal so check out what he done after that ________________ WORLD'S/ 1st: his original world' 2nd: tensei shitara slime datta ken World BTW English is not my first language so forgive me for any grammar mistakes and thank you i don't own anything except the oc characters so yeah including the cover picture

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"What am I ?" The simple question that asked Schimmel to the one he thought was his most trusted person, started a waterfall of events. A question so honest, so pure, demands an answer as absolute. And Schimmel was not satisfied by the weak comeback he received. Motivated by a disruptive violence and never-ceasing grudge, the beast-man starts rummaging through the most dreadful secrets of the world. Secrets that more than one wish to see disappear… But how can the truth stay hidden when more join in his quest, asking the same thing, awakening suspicions ? "What the hell are we ? In this sad and horrible place, what are we ? Why are we here ? What is our world and what are we in it ?" Cried the world. "We want to know !" Screamed the choir. "Even if it hurts ?", retorted the God of Mist. The world silenced. But Schimmel's voice did not die out. "Even if it hurts… Tell me ! So I can finally be sure. So I can finally choose what I want to become !" Clans fall, Empire's rises, leads by fools. Gods laugh while hitting their heads on walls, howling like maniacs. The ghosts of war await, never away from their tombs, chains at their feets. Humans and Demons make love, trying to understand who's trapped : Those living under the heavy sky or those thriving in the underworld ? Beasts run and run until they collapse, dead, in the remains of destroyed cities. The small world of Sith is eaten by nothingness under the glassy-eyes of sinking skyscrapers. Monsters ravage and are ravaged, as always, blinded by their hunger, not showing a care in the world. War growl. The end is coming. Corruption in eating us. Us and everything. The world is disappearing… Is there no escape from the lie ? And in this ending realm….What are we ?

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Reborn as a goddess in mha (Dropped)

A lonely weeb on his way home from the store with a new game when he meets his end thanks to truck-kun but that’s the best thing that ever happened to him as he meets god who gives him a chance to be reincarnated with 5 wishes. What will he or now she do in her new life in my hero academia? ********************** I am dyslexic so spelling and grammar are hard for me even though English is the one and only language I can speak. But I’ll try my best to make this as good as I can this is technically my first novel as my other one I lost motivation for before I even started writing so yeah don’t hold high hopes for this also, I write on my phone so don’t expect super long chapters because is just not happening having to put up with typing on this app is bad enough without having to type long chapters on my phone too so chapter length will be short probably 1000-1500 words. I like constructive criticism it helps me improve I don’t want people telling me that my writing is crap or giving me quote “ disgusted gazes” like that doesn’t help all it does it put me down and make me lose motivation so please constructive criticism only thanks. Also I do not own naruto or my hero academia this is a fanfic all characters that appear in this fanfic belong to the original copyright holders the only character I own is my mc and any I may or may not add in the future. I do not own the cover photo if you are the original artist or owner and would like for me to take it down I will do so.

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ghost_316x
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boys don't focus to much on my grammar alright that's all i could say and its my first time Writing a book all love...... ..... .. ........

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Writing Quality : 2/5 Stability of Updates : 4/5 Story Development : 2/5 Character Design : 3/5 World Background : 2/5 The grammar is quite bad. There is a lot of errors and even then the way the MC " speaks " is just weird. Also the author used too much of " time skips " ... in one sentence he is one place and the next sentence he is already finished an entire chapter with just 10 words of resume ... I don't like when a fanfic cuts corners by saying ( like in the story.. ) or even not using that but just skipping chunks of info . I read 12 chapters and I can't continue . The story requires to be remade , polished and the grammar .. required a bit more effort . The story could be good but it's just too hurried .

Leo_Bassist
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It's good btw. It's like a calming down that having tired reading a struggle mc books. Don't change personality of Mc. I like evil and ruthless mc. Don't make him a simp or perverted mc. Does Mc will travel other animes after tensura? I suggest One piece, naruto, hxh, or cultivation novels. I also suggest don't put too much sentences in one paragraph it's hurt to read you know, What I mean long paragraph. If paragraph are long enough transfer the next sentences to another paragraph. ☺️☺️

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