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Infinite Immortal Lord-Start From Hogwarts

Penulis: Fantasy3104
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What is Infinite Immortal Lord-Start From Hogwarts

Baca novel Infinite Immortal Lord-Start From Hogwarts yang ditulis oleh penulis Fantasy3104 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Mc is reborn as Harry Potter. On the day of birth he awakens Infinite Immortal Emperor System. Novice gift pack is Immortal soul and Infinite body ressurection after 1 second of death and 100 quotas f...

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Mc is reborn as Harry Potter. On the day of birth he awakens Infinite Immortal Emperor System. Novice gift pack is Immortal soul and Infinite body ressurection after 1 second of death and 100 quotas for Immortal relatives and friends. When Voldemort comes to attact lily and james are already immortal along with lupin and sirius. Due to death of Voldemort HOST completes novice mission and gets Infinite God Space with inital space that can occupy one Earth and any object or living thing is in time freeze restriction unless freed by host. *Note* The content is purely fictional and there is no relation with original work. First plane - Harry potter World Second Plane - Full Time Mage/Versatile mage/quanzi fashi Abilities till now:- 1. Immortal Soul and Infinite body ressurection 2.Immortal Subject quota(10/100) 3.Infinite God Space 4.Infinite Language and Voice 5.Infinite Talent Potential 6.Indestructible Loyal Artifact Quota 7. System Panel 8. Omnipotent faith system

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Jackleell
JackleellLv1Jackleell

Wow, this is horrible. The interaction between each character is so bad. Here is an example: [Example] james: lily do you feel the endless vitality in our bodies because of the golden light on baby. lily: yes its a miracle. look at the baby it is looking like a god's reincarnated anyways it is our baby not matter what The spelling is bad, grammar is awful, and the chapters are short. Please try to use Grammarly to fix these issues or ChatGPT.

nexus777
nexus777Lv13nexus777

The concept behind your fanfiction is interesting. Grammatical errors are minimal if not almost negligible. Maybe the development of events is accelerated a bit, but considering the story is only just beginning it's not a real problem in itself; not to mention that the author seems to be taking the overpowered route for the development of his character so it is normal that the story develops in this way. Having said all this, I don't give you 5 stars because I'm curious if you can do better and surpass yourself as an author. (P.S. Please don't put your story in HIATUS and keep writing).

HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv4HereForGoodRead

A notably terrible story, that about it.

The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4The_Dark_Hydrax

Sounds interesting. Please keep updating!

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