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In the Novel World

Penulis: Dark_Sider321
Fantasy
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What is In the Novel World

Baca novel In the Novel World yang ditulis oleh penulis Dark_Sider321 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. April 1,2023A boy can be seen in an empty class as he is looking out the window. The whole classroom is enveloped in peaceful silence but the same can’t said about the outside. A “ONCE” beautiful girl...

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April 1,2023 A boy can be seen in an empty class as he is looking out the window. The whole classroom is enveloped in peaceful silence but the same can’t said about the outside. A “ONCE” beautiful girl is being apprehended by the law enforcement and the people around her is giving her a disgusted look. The boy is seeing everything from the second floor of their school building. No emotion can be detected from his face apart from a calm smile. After seeing the police cars left the school premise, he quietly left the classroom. Nobody can tell from his expression that the girl who is being taken by the police is his so-called “GIRLFRIEND”. \ \ \ \ \ It is my first-time writing novel and I don’t have much experience about writing. English my third language and I am not very good at it. So, you guys will find a ton of grammatical or other mistakes. But I will try to improve my writing quality over time. It will of great help if you guys can give me your honest opinion in the comment section. I know there will a lot of criticism because of my writing quality but please keep it in check because it’s not a pleasant feeling to hear people talk crap about someone’s work even if that work isn’t good. Last but not least Enjoy my novel!

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The Other Side : UTOPIA

Layar dimulai dengan background hitam dan sebuah suara. 'Anda mendambakan kebebasan?' Lalu seorang malaikat yang terbang muncul, dan tempat dibawahnya disorot. Itu tempat yang indah dengan banyak cahaya dan sungai yang mengalir jernih. Lalu gambar berganti dengan hutan dengan kristal berwarna warni. Gambar terus berganti dengan pasar, danau, dan tempat-tempat indah lainnya di dalam game. 'Tempat indah yang bisa dijelajahi dengan bebas. Terdapat 6 benua berbeda dengan keindahannya masing-masing. Lari dengan liar atau terbang dengan lepas.' Kali ini layar memunculkan berbagai macam makhluk mitos yang hanya ada di dongeng. Makhluk yang memiliki sayap, bertanduk, orang pendek, makhluk cantik bertelinga runcing, dan beberapa manusia biasa. Mereka memegang berbagai macam senjata dan melakukan berbagai kegiatan seperti memancing, memasak, konser dan lain-lain. 'Terdapat lima ras berbeda dengan lebih dari 20 job cabang yang bisa dimainkan. Cari dan temukan apa yang Anda inginkan. Ekplorasi semua fantasimu.' 'Ayo datang dan nikmati kebebasan milikmu di The Other Side : Utopia. Rilis secara global tanggal 28 Agustus 20XX pukul 20.00.' *** Cerita berpusat pada Kyree Harris seorang tuan muda keluarga konglomerat yang kabur dari rumah untuk mencari kebebasan. Saat itulah ia tertarik pada sebuah iklan game VRMMORPG yang baru dirilis. Ia memutuskan untuk mencari kebebasan di dunia virtual. Dan begitulah cerita seorang player berbakat akhirnya muncul. Ayo ikuti keseruan Kyree memainkan game The Other Side : UTOPIA.

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HIS MISTRESS : Bound to him

"Even if you go to the end of the world, I will find you and bind you to my side" Excerpt Let me go, let go off me, Tang xi screamed struggling to free herself. Let her go, Qin Yan commanded and they set her free. I told you to stay put and wait for me but you had to run off, do we have to do this all the time, Qin Yan said frustrated at his little woman. Why can't you just let me go,I don't want to be with you anymore, you won't give me a legitimate status but you want me to be entangled with you, what sort of shameless man are you? Just let me go and go be with your girlfriend, Tang xi said with tears in her eyes. I dare you to say that again, Qin Yan said forcefully holding Tang xi's chin up, in this life, you can only be mine, Qin Yan's woman and even as a ghost, you did still be my ghost, even if you keep running away from me, I will go beyond the heavens and earth to find you and keep you by my side, Qin Yan declared. Take her to the villa and lock her up, she can't leave without my permission. Yes boss, the bodyguards echoed taking the still struggling Tang xi to the villa. __________________________________ Tang xi, the number one beauty of M city and illigitimate daughter of the Tang family gets entangled with the ruthless and cold young master of the Qin family, Qin Yan, and he would do anything to keep her by his side. In Tang xi's quest for revenge, will her relationship with young master Qin Yan be her greatest weapon or her ultimate downfall? As she navigates the treacherous landscape of family rivalries, hidden agendas, and forbidden passion, Tang Xi must confront the darkness of her own past and the true cost of her revenge. Will she emerge victorious, or will her heart become the latest casualty in the endless struggle for power and control?" #Romance #possesive #CEO #Beauty #Revenge Book cover credit: Pin Interest

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Rohan_Shinde_2731
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It has a different start from other books, which I find very interesting and very promising, and am looking forward to reading more of it.

Kw0z
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Your synopsis is pretty bad. It doesn’t really give me any info on the story, thus making readers not want to read it.

Bananalover20
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my mother language is not English so I am not so good at it....I like the fact that the author is using common words which is quite understandable.

unknowndude567
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I am a sucker for mystery and the last chapter gave me a mysterious vibe....so I guess its not so bad for a new novel.

Deternitydude
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the beginning is pretty good it's setting the personality for the mc and what to kind of expect ncc

Joseph_Gomes_1373
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I suppose the beginning isn't so horrible, and the English is more legible than in other novels. I hope to see more of you in the future.

Deciduous_B0ltling
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I’ve read till ch 26, which is the latest currently and is on hiatus cuz of author’s finals. The beginning was interesting. But after the transmigration, most things were quite similar to the Webnovel ‘No More Pain For This Villain’. My suggestion to the author: differentiate your novel from that one as much and as soon as possible (while you have changed minor plot currently along with names and appearances of characters and places, that is not enough). Also, I don’t like novels with the harem tag, but I’ll give this a shot. I’d recommend to minimise the significance of the harem to the plot or at least make it so there’s only 2-3 members of the harem and they don’t instantly fall for him for some illogical reason; make the whole thing realistic.

ZaHagag
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Tampilkan spoiler

Maverick_sfx
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#tragedy tag is a must in this novel, so some might not like it

Karnann
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when will you upload next chapter ? author I am waiting

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