Harem in a Labyrinth

not bad. lets see how it goes. i read the novel up to volume 10, saw the anime and then manga. i to think Michio was only a so so mc. so much potential wasted... and yeah, roxanne is the best waify hands down.

Didn't read the fic yet, but the fact that you intend to "rectify" Michio (the guy somehow managed to come off as beta Japanese MC despite losing his V-card and I still don't know how he pulled that off) is enough for me to give you encouraging 5-star.

I've read up to chapter 26 so far. Gotta know, the idea for a fanfic isn't bad, but the MC's interactions with the world are just... empty. MC frankly simp for Roxanne, and in a bad way. It makes me cringe in shame at times. "Roxanne is my woman. My slave!" Who even talks like that? Even if Roxanne is objectively beautiful and has a nice personality, it doesn't mean that a person should act like a fan who gets the opportunity to date their idol. Well, for now I'll stop there, but if nothing changes in the future, then I'm afraid the fanfic will slide into another tasteless fulfillment of the author's innermost desires on paper.

This is a premature review, given the relatively new chapters that just released. Because of that, I will try to be constructive without spoiling. First off, I like the idea of using Isekai Meikyuu de Harem wo as a fanfiction and the OC so far. The writing style and quality have no problems and I didn't spot any grammatical problems which stood out. In fact, it's easy to read and fun. The only problem I have is that this story seems to want to have a stronger more secure version of Michio. While this is fine, it seems that it will go for a more 'OP protagonist enjoys the different aspects of the world without worrying' route. If that is the case, I would recommend spending less time focusing on the stats and equipment of every small encounter and more on the character interactions. It's just a recommendation, but it would allow more space for what I believe the author is attempting to go for. Of course, you can still be going for a similar realistic isekai struggle and can ignore what I said, as there isn't too much to go off in under 15 chapters. I still recommend for others to read it, since it is still fun despite my seemingly long complaints. Definitely going to be a fun ride down the road. I wish the author luck if he needs it.

Give 5 Star because this is the only fic about Harem Dungeon so far i here. And i really like the original manga, so 5 stars bro!

Next chapter please

Well, it is better version then original. That's for sure.... Original one was just that trashy. Unfortunately, it's still retain some of the worst qualities of original one. Like, a lot of chapters for a simple stuff. Or most of the chapters feels like a useless fillers. I don't hardly blame author, how to say, the fundament was just this weak. But come on, can't you bring something more of original stuff to the novel? You know better not... Yes, just keep this slice of life pacing with easy fights... Who knows what kind of unspeakable horrors dwelling in you head?

The only thing I hope from this fanfic is that the character has a good package (at least 24 cm) to make a beautiful ahegao to those girls, especially the big girls with airy breasts hahaha. Michio's was good but it only reached 17 cm I think, although it was good for a Japanese and enough to please his girls, he could never completely conquer their bodies or at least reach maximum pleasure, that is, satisfied but never ecstatic

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My man.... Did you drop ? .

Are you okay you haven't updated in a while.

A better version than the original and quite good in my opinion.Let's see where this goes

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Espero que no lo deje caer, soluciona todo lo que no me gusta de la novela original -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

The author is doing a pretty good job with the story. I hope the story will continue keep up the good work.

Pretty good start. Keep it up author!

I like the idea!! waiting for more... soon? right?!?🙏 _________________________________________________________________

Thank you for remaking this story with so much potential! The BP system was great along with the financial convenience. choices became more dynamic and with different paths. I'm looking forward to the arc where he meets the elf count. In the original story, I couldn't stand the mayonnaise recipes lol It was tiring. But his harem is incredible and has great possibilities.

Well... it would seem that author.meet truck-kun. It was really good while it lasted. Author uploaded daily and was happily talking about the future plans. Thst he was going to upload the next chapter the day after.... then poof. He went missing. I hope its just life being hard. He lost his pc or something and not thar he had an accident