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GATE but warhammer (mainly krieg)

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What is GATE but warhammer (mainly krieg)

Baca novel GATE but warhammer (mainly krieg) yang ditulis oleh penulis DaoistcNgNHn yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. you watched/read GATE and must have gone "man there is no Warhammer 40K" same so I wrote this. enjoy the Death Korps will be a bit more lax in this storyNOW BLOOD FOR THE GOD EMPEROR AND SKULLS FOR TH...

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you watched/read GATE and must have gone "man there is no Warhammer 40K" same so I wrote this. enjoy the Death Korps will be a bit more lax in this story NOW BLOOD FOR THE GOD EMPEROR AND SKULLS FOR THE GOD EMPEROR OF MANKIND

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UNITED WE STAND: 515

"The Five Mystical Stones have already awakend the Great Conquerer, and we cannot do anything to stop this." Esmeralda Spoken to the Group as she hold her Crystal Ball and started to walk. "We cant do anything? why?" Miya asks while standing behind alucard. "The only thing we need to do now is wait." esmeralda whispered as she sat on a bench and trying to hold her tears back. "We can still defeat them even if we are out numbered." Alucard said trying to wake the spirits of the Group. "No, the five of you will die instantly if you go there, we dont have any options." Esmeralda continuesly talking. "We are Doo--- Suddenly she froze and her tears stopped on mid air. "Esmeralda? are you okey?" Fanny Asks as she walk towards esmeralda trying to unfreeze her. "Its useless." Eudora Whispered while Making an Electric Ball on her hands. "The Time Froze as the Conquerer walks on the surface of the land of dawn." she continuesly speaking. "Bu- but how can we move if the time froze?" Miya asks as She walk infront of the Group. "The, Stones." Alucard Shouts as he Rise his sword and pointed at the glowing stone. "We have the missing pieces of tge Mystical Stones. "Yes, of course we are the Five Heroes on the Prophecy of Esmeralda." Tigreal Said while Rising his Shield and pointing on the Glowing Stone. "Lets Go out there and save The Land Of Dawn." Tigreal Said as he Walks Toward the Gate of the Moniyan empire. "We can Still Change the Future." Alucard Whispers as he grabbed miyas hand and started to walk. "VICTORY!" Fanny Shouts As she Flew away using her cables. all the five of them walked outside the walls of the moniyan empire. __________________ _____________________________ If you Want to read the end you can scroll or swipe to the next chapter and read first what happened After Harper defeated the evil force. and How the Abyss gained so much power and defeated the moniyan empire again.

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Great fanfic definitely no Bias here

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This is either the work of a novice author, or an extremely lazy one. The dialog is terrible, nobody sound right. First there was no reaserch into how military men speak, so they sound like kids trying to imitate a soldier they saw. Somehow even normal people are done weirdly, making even old men sound mentally challenged, as of he never grew up. Second the chapters are short and incorrectly formated, so they are hard to read, and they take the form of a diary more than a book in the sense that, something happened, something else happened, this one said something. This style can work sometimes, but this isn't it. What I think happend, is that the author read a lot of fanfiction and try to imitate them.

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