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Feathers of Law

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What is Feathers of Law

Baca novel Feathers of Law yang ditulis oleh penulis Ruan_D_VD_Merwe yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. In the world of Alnemia, There are 5 contents named Palros, Selo, Vertio, Werno and Dresto. Join me as I tell you the story of Louis Coldwater, a 17 year old boy with aspirations of becoming a Writer...

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In the world of Alnemia, There are 5 contents named Palros, Selo, Vertio, Werno and Dresto. Join me as I tell you the story of Louis Coldwater, a 17 year old boy with aspirations of becoming a Writer. Let me tell of his adventures in Alnemia and I shall teach you the power of LAW. -This is my first novel and I hope the first of many, This story follows Louis as he learns of the power of law. Law is the power everyone is born with, and the only way to channel the power is with a special tattoo of a feather gained at birth. When focused on, the tattoo will glow and a quill will materialize in the users hand. Using a language newly discovered you can write commands in the air and what is written shall happen. For instance when using a red quill "fire quill" to write Circle of fire, a fire will light around the user in a circle. Simple right? This is the power of law, and this is what the story is about. Sort of, it is about how this world changed with the whims of one man and how Louis grows and learns more about this LAW.-

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The most beautiful heart

One day a young man was standing in the middle of the town proclaiming that he had the most beautiful heart in the whole valley. A large crowd gathered and they all admired his heart for it was perfect. There was not a mark or a flaw in it. Yes, they all agreed it truly was the most beautiful heart they had ever seen. The young man was very proud and boasted more loudly about his beautiful heart. Suddenly, an old man appeared at the front of the crowd and said, "Why your heart is not nearly as beautiful as mine." The crowd and the young man looked at the old man's heart. It was beating strongly... but full of scars. It had places where pieces had been removed and other pieces put in ... but they didn't fit quite right and there were several jagged edges. In fact, in some places there were deep gouges where whole pieces were missing. The people starred ... how could he say his heart is more beautiful, they thought? The young man looked at the old man's heart and saw its state and laughed "You must be joking," he said. "Compare your heart with mine... mine is perfect and yours is a mess of scars and tears." "Yes," said the old man, "Yours is perfect looking... but I would never trade with you. You see, every scar represents a person to whom I have given my love….I tear out a piece of my heart and give it to them ... and often they give me a piece of their heart which fits into the empty place in my heart... but because the pieces aren't exact, I have some rough edges, which I cherish, because they remind me of the love we shared. Sometimes I have given pieces of my heart away... and the other person hasn't returned a piece of his heart to me. These are the empty gouges... giving love is taking a chance. Although these gouges are painful, they stay open, reminding me of the love I have for these people too... and I hope someday they may return and fill the space I have waiting. So now do you see what true beauty is?" The young man stood silently with tears running down his cheeks. He walked up to the old man, reached into his perfect young and beautiful heart and ripped a piece out. He offered it to the old man with trembling hands. The old man took his offering, placed it in his heart and then took a piece from his old scarred heart and placed it in the wound in the young man's heart. It fit.... but not perfectly, as there were some jagged edges. The young man looked at his heart, not perfect anymore but more beautiful than ever, since love from the old man's heart flowed into his. They embraced and walked away side by side.

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This is my on opinion on my work, I know that it takes time to become a better writer an I have time. My updates will be slow as I'm not always in the right mind to write and if you see the story getting derailed let me know, I will read it and try to come up with new ways to change and improve the story. -This is my own review of this story.

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