'A world where people cultivates to become strong and attain immortality but when you know all people around you, can cultivate martial arts, but you can't, what will you do? This is a story of a young hero, who can't cultivate, and This is the story of his adventures '
When I read the title of the book my first thought was that it was going to be some amazing story, that's when I read the synopsis. Alright, I won't stand on ceremony then.
Author, first of all, your synopsis is the basis for every known wuxia in this world. it's like your not describing your book but the genre as a whole and even that you barely managed. The synopsis' goal isn't to ward off demons rather to intrigue readers into giving your novel a chance.
Other than being absolutely lackluster my second problem with your synopsis is its complete lack of common sense. If this is a story about cultivators then even if your main character can't cultivate in the beginning HE WILL SOONER OR LATER CULTIVATE. This isn't a spoiler just common sense.
Ok, so I decided to look past all that and actually read the novel. For those who want to understand this novel in terms of actual writing quality, I suggest you begin and end at the first paragraph, any further then I'm not responsible for you all never reading cultivation novels again.
That's all, thanks~