dont take this the wrong way, since it was actually well written, however alot of it is just Conversation between the members of the family, even the conversations in the movie is just that conversation, the story does a poor habit of explaining what happens around them, meaning if you havent seen the movie then this story will feel impossible to follow since one wouldnt know where or what or how things are going....for what the story was aimed to be, meaning a reaction from the family madrigal towards the movie encanto i think you did wonderfull, tho the Panic attack near the end was a bit much if i am being personally honest, other then that the book could do with a bit more detail about the goins on other then the conversations, since it feels really off otherwise (for those that didnt watch the movie)
also for the music scenes i would advise adding links to theyr youtube video in the comments? not by link but simply by name of title that way people that are reading this can follow along with the music......
