webnovel

Douluo Dalu: Lightning God Ascension(dropped)

Penulis: Supernatural
others
Lengkap · 1.3M Dilihat
  • 35 Bab
    Konten
  • 4.7
    36 peringkat
  • NO.200+
    DUKUNG

What is Douluo Dalu: Lightning God Ascension(dropped)

Baca novel Douluo Dalu: Lightning God Ascension(dropped) yang ditulis oleh penulis Supernatural yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Rai, a young man about 19 years old was bored of waiting for the novels and fan-fiction that he read to update so he decided to take a walk outside since it's a sunny day. Right when he got outside, l...

Ringkasan

Rai, a young man about 19 years old was bored of waiting for the novels and fan-fiction that he read to update so he decided to take a walk outside since it's a sunny day. Right when he got outside, lightning struck him and he die. His last thought were 'Where the F*** did that lightning comes from.' I been thinking, I read a lot of fanfic so I should be good at writing them, that how it works right? Anyway, after reading for a while I decided to write one of my own while waiting for other to update their. This will my try at writing a fic so any comments on how to improve or if you spot any spelling error will be appreciated. I do not own Douluo dalu or any character form said novel. This is for entertainment only. I also don't own this picture. If anyone want to continue this fanfic, be my guest. I already upload what will happen but change it if you want. If one of you want to continue this fanfic, email me with the email I give before or put a comment on the last chapter so I can give you a shout out.

Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai

son of the mountain you stole my heart

WARNING: MATURE CONTENT AHEAD. "Now that I have tasted the serenity of laying my head on your masculine chest, no one can shove me away from you my king. we're entrapped to each other my King ... come with me tonight...let me feed you the honey from my mother land...let me reveal to you the fertile untilled land which no man has ever set their feet upon.. for it has been hiden from them for many a days...it is only for you till your highness..." Sheshije, a young maiden from the ukadama kingdom is forced by her greedy for power farther to mary Kodawa, the crown prince. Who is considered arrogant and evil by nearly every person in the kingdom... While being the damsel in distress she meets her knight in shining armor. Seghete who introduced himself to her as a hunter... due to reasons best known to fate.. the two end up falling in love at the very first day they met. Sheshije's father and the crown prince try their best to stop the mighty bond that was drastically sprouting between the two... Shock grips them all after finding out that Seghete is actually not a hunter but the only son of the great Tubheta emperor! SON OF THE MOUNTAIN YOU STOLE MY HEART. Is a novel beautifully painted with romance and a little potions of the taveta culture. One finds it hard to put it down once they start reading.. it has a fair portion of explicit mature content which may not be good for younger readers.. or anyone who feels uncomfortable with the content..

Joy_Rayasi · Fantasi
Peringkat tidak cukup
17 Chs

peringkat

  • Rata-rata Keseluruhan
  • Kualitas penulisan
  • Memperbarui stabilitas
  • Pengembangan Cerita
  • Desain Karakter
  • latar belakang dunia
Ulasan-ulasan
Disukai
Terbaru
meldor1991
meldor1991Lv6meldor1991

plz stop this review spamming, all the authors on this site are sacrificing there time and are propably crashing their heads on the desk, to provide entertainment for us readers. sssoooooo please show some respect you losers :(

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém

Kurosis
KurosisLv4Kurosis

Tampilkan spoiler

C_Sunlight
C_SunlightLv5C_Sunlight

This is a good story although it seems somewhat awkward at times. The MC is interesting with both his fighting style as well as his personality. He contributes and doesn't just do everything Tang San says but he doesn't oppose him without good reason. I'd say the author did a good job of not making him a wallflower. There isn't very much development on side character's strength and usefulness but the story isn't very long yet so 5 stars. At the very least, their personalities aren't 2 dimensional. The world is based off of Douluo Dalu so 5 stars. :3 Anyway the English could be a bit better but it's only the author forgetting things like ed, and s on the end of words so it doesn't take too much away from the story. 4 stars. As for the story development it's just 4 stars but I wouldn't worry about it too much as the story is pretty short and it hasn't got to the interesting parts of Douluo Dalu. It's a nice novel but it could be better if the author studied up a little on English and used more descriptive words. All said and done I enjoyed it.

SpongeSponge
SpongeSpongeLv14SpongeSponge

Just another reader here helping author fight agaist review spammer. I don't get it why do people have to get so low attacking other poeple just fo get their novel a better chance. And to put it on top they spam review a fan-fiction novel which according to the webnovel will never get any contract due to copyright policy.

Kurosis
KurosisLv4Kurosis

Great fan pic keep going and plz don't drop. and y is there so many fake 1* reviews? who the hell did u piss off haha anyways thanks for writing this and don't let it get to you =)

DDclash
DDclashLv5DDclash

I will just give it five star, just because it is a lot better than most novels on this site. At least he have some originality, it sure isn't best work on the platform, but at least it is readable. You won't have a desire to throw up from the first few chapters.

RedIllusion
RedIllusionLv5RedIllusion

Tampilkan spoiler

Daoofbricks
DaoofbricksLv2Daoofbricks

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

SSS_Class_Reader
SSS_Class_ReaderLv5SSS_Class_Reader

🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕

AzureYuhao
AzureYuhaoLv2AzureYuhao

Expexpexpxppzpzpzpzpxpxpxppzpzpzpzpz Expexpexpxppzpzpzpzpxpxpxppzpzpzpzpz ExpexpexpxppzpzpzpzpxpxpxppzpzpzpzpzExpexpexpxppzpzpzpzpxpxpxppzpzpzpzpzExpexpexpxppzpzpzpzpxpxpxppzpzpzpzpzExpexpexpxppzpzpzpzpxpxpxppzpzpzpzpzExpexpexpxppzpzpzpzpxpxpxppzpzpzpzpz

Book_junkie
Book_junkieLv14Book_junkie

Loved it! If you get a chance to pick it back up please do!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

meldor1991
meldor1991Lv6meldor1991

gets better and better, gets better and better, gets better and better, gets better and better, gets better and better, gets better and better, gets better and better, gets better and better, gets better and better, gets better and better.

RiskyA
RiskyALv7RiskyA

It's good fan fic and easy to read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☝👍👍☝☝👍👍👍☝👍☝👍👍👍👍☝👍👍☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝👍👍👍👍👍👍☝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☝👍👍👍👍☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☝👌👉👈👏👐💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💖💖💖💖

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

DUKUNG

Lebih lanjut tentang buku ini

Parents Strongly Cautionedmature rating
Lapor