Doomed to Eternity

I will finish this novel, have a good day 🙏

From the first chapter, I was hooked and couldn't wait to read more. Despite the fact that there are only a few chapters available, the story has already piqued my interest. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. The quality of the writing is evident, and it's clear that the author has put a lot of effort into crafting this tale.

It's a nice start. It makes you curious about what will happen next. The conversations aren't awkward, which I can't say for many other novels on the platform. In other words, it's a great story!

pfft being a good king is overrated!! This novel is very well written and the story flows perfectly from scene to scene making it an enjoyable read. The pace of the story also works well with the plot! cant wait to read more!

It's like a poem and odyssey. Really worth to give a try. I don't have much to talk about the story and everything else, because there are few chapters available. By for what I read so far, it's good. The only problem here is the grammar and the flow, sometimes it breaks the experience of the reader, but I'm certain that it would be changed in the future, and for that, I'm in. Adding to the Library :)

This is very well written. I'd expect something like this in a bookstore. Unlike most of the stuff I've read, there's a quality here that I didn't expect to see. Really, I'm very surprised to see such good writing. As for the story, it's interesting enough for me to continue past the first chapter. I'll see where it goes, but this is a very good start

I love the use of biblical terms in a story about a loop in time. I have to say that despite the fact that the synopsis is simple, it ends up catching you. It is definitely a story that promises to be a success. I want to continue reading more chapters.