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DC: Jackie Chan Adventures

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Baca novel DC: Jackie Chan Adventures yang ditulis oleh penulis DrakeBerger yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. born in Gotham living in a warehouse. after work trying to make a life for himself but who would have guessed that a dragon would crash in and followed by heroes and with their power they banish the d...

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born in Gotham living in a warehouse. after work trying to make a life for himself but who would have guessed that a dragon would crash in and followed by heroes and with their power they banish the dragon only for Alex to get sucked in as well. Watch as Alex Survives and gain powers and come back stronger. All events and stories take place on Earth 16 the young justice universe. All DC and Jackie chan Adventures properties belong to their respective owner’s this is for fun.

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One Man Show (Muzher Kaleem M.A)

Imran was busy reading a magzine sitting in a very easy mood when the nearby telephone bell rang. Imran did not pay attention to it at first. But when the bell kept ringing continuesly he put the magzine aside making a bad face and strech out his hand to pick up the receiver. "Sulman is speaking." Imran started speaking in Sulman's tone of voice. "Where is Imran, Sulman?" Superintendent Fiaz's voice sounded on the other side and Imran's eyes sparkled suddenly. "Sir Imran_______oh, so you are not aware. It is surprising sir Super. You keep saying he is your close friend but when he was in a difficult time period you did not even ask." Imran still spoke in Sulman's tone of voice. "What_______ What are you saying? What difficult time? What happened to him? Speak clearly." _______ There was a hint of amazament in the voice of Super Fiaz. "So you really are not aware of anything?"_______ Imran said with a pout. "Do not talk nonsence_______ Speak straight what happened."_______ The roar of Super Fiaz sounded. "The matter is like this sir that it can not be spoken clearly. The problem is like this that once it get twisted it can not be straightened. You could not straighten it untill today then how would sir Imran be able to straighten it."_______ Imran was hellbent on infuriating him. "Are you drunk? I will shoot you." As expected by Imran, Super Fiaz's patience was waning. "Obviously Sir you can only do this, when a friend is in a difficult time instead of helping him you just shoot his servant. Anyhow you do not need to shoot. I, myself, am thinking of commiting suicide. After this problem of Sir Imran I do not have any way eccept this."_______ Imran spoke in Sulman's tone of voice but this time he said it in a pitiful tone. Author: Muzher Kaleem M.A Translator: A wild dreamer (If there is an objection from auther's side this translation will be taken down immediately)

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Whisper's of my soul

(This is a rewrite of my first novel embracing the shadows because I was not able to connect to the story I decided to stop it if I cannot connect with it how will the readers even though most of the things will be the same I will change things that I didn't like, Atleast give it a try) Daemon is a normal boy who always tries hard in his studies for the recognition of his peers but fails to do so, even though he didn't have friends to play with and was often bullied for his long hair he never complained. Because he was not truly alone as there was one girl always with him and he thought everything would change with time. But the reality is cruel to everyone one day everything changed for him as he started to hear a voice in his head whispering how this world is cruel and you need power to control it. After some incidents which lead him to compel towards the darker side, he succumbed to the darkness within and let his other side out. How he will live a double life solving the mysteries of this world and the voice in his mind. How will his life change as the darkness engulf him? Let's find out. Even though the story is based in India for my Convenience I will change names because This is a story based on alternate earth and there will be many changes, not the same earth (I am a newby author and I hope you give me an honest response I am willing to correct my mistakes so write a review, English is not my first language just so you know) (I am writing this novel on my phone of course because I don't have money for buying a laptop.) ( patreon.com/Piyush_eternal ) (This is my Patreon account new to that too so tell me if anything is important for the time being. I will appreciate your support )

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TiagoRits
TiagoRitsLv10TiagoRits

Espero ansioso pelo desenvolvimento. MC x Ravena. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

yokedjaguar
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The grammar is the biggest issue. Honestly if you just reread what you write there wouldn't be half the mistakes in a single paragraph. As your not doing that words are missing letters, there are misspells, no capitalization, I could go on and on. The character interactions and dialog also needs some cleaning up, besides that it has a decent plot. You just need to proofread yourself or get a proofreader.

DrakeBerger
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Shameless writer saying this is the best Jackie chan adventures fan-fic ever. if you like it please leave a review. If you have an idea let me know and thank you for reading.

carrotpie
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Good potential but goes to fast skipping a lot of detail, trying to make emotional scenes before we have made any connection with the characters, and the grammars off .

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Kami12
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This story great so far I looking forward to seeing it reach its full potential. Keep up the good work author. As lord Kami I approve this message.

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