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Daluo Dalu- The Heart of Eternity (My Version)

Penulis: DaoistlvsgQ6
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Love isn't just a word

highschool is a place traded by sex and popularity and I cared about all those shits before my heart was ripped apart by my perfect boyfriend , guess what I was just a toy he had taken her virginity away from,i know this may sound unbelievable but i did want the person I'll give my v-card to be my husband someday. Facing the trauma i did what ever sane girl would do. i hid myself to escape from more boys glancing my way and to avoid any more unnecessary drama especially senior year were sex was like food and people craved so much for popularity. But i wish i knew what i was getting myself into when i said yes to Abe Walker. *~* Meet Abe Walker His rich,his popular. Everyone worships him. just his presence could make girls wet their panties. Girls and guys would kill just to have him on their bed. No one dared to start a war with him. yeah am you get the picture already. He doesn't do lovey- dovey and he has never kissed a girl but he does ditect sex to chase them off his back.He gets into a relationship with freya for revenge but what happens when he falls for her. But logan wasn't giving up easily and what happens when rivals from his past wants to ruin him and the only way to do that was hurting her. "she is the only reason I knew what love was, if i loose her i loose myself and i vow to protect her, to hold her to make her happier because the world was so cruel to her that she never had those things but fuck them!, I'll be her world,her love her happiness, her support even do it means losing everything including myself" i stare at him no jokes in my eyes as i clench my hand into a tight fist "so touch her her and you'll know exactly what's worse than death". This is a story filled with jealousy and danger, An ex, a badboy and one broken girl, contains mature scenes, high mature language and terrible grown obsessions. Have a very busy schedule with all the online class notes and assignments with the music practical and other stuff and of course am a human and i need rests. but i promise one chapter per week or two weeks. understand with me.❤

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IJUSTWANTREAD
IJUSTWANTREADLv4IJUSTWANTREAD

The name is Douluo Dalu not Dalou Dalu xPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxP

ManGanu
ManGanuLv5ManGanu

Nice plot story But need more chapter If author want more sprit stone Lol me Dhdusidueidusissiajabsjsowoshwhsjdusududueidodididudhdjdbedudisowjshdudidjdgeudidisidhsjsjsidijsjddjdididuejdjxudjdudusisjsjsjsjsjsududjsjsjsjsj

warcan
warcanLv11warcan

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rildec
RildecLv11Rildec

Grammar is a bit rough but readable. However my main complaint is the mc. He's more like a side character that follows canon. He is a bit weak willed with a convuluted background, his cutesy personality is entertaining at the start but it gets a bit annoying as the story goes on. So far the other characters see him as a naive boy or someone to worry about. This is definitely not a fanfic where the mc is badass. There are also some incorrect story details but author justifies that by saying we can't expect him to remember things he read "hundreds of thousands of years ago" and the only one he could remember clearly is naruto lol. Tldr mc is soft and not badass and story details are messy.

Demonic_Ogre
Demonic_OgreLv4Demonic_Ogre

srsly no intro....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

ChenXian
ChenXianLv6ChenXian

I like this story very much, I find it an interesting idea, and the quality is also extremely great, but I'm a bit on the back foot here, since your last story was also great, but you dropped it, please don't drop this one too, don't pay attention to negative comments and such, the story is yours and yours alone, to do as you would like.

Bala_Prakash
Bala_PrakashLv4Bala_Prakash

Hope you don't drop this novel......................??????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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