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Come Back In Ten Years(dis the title... still on hiatus)

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What is Come Back In Ten Years(dis the title... still on hiatus)

Baca novel Come Back In Ten Years(dis the title... still on hiatus) yang ditulis oleh penulis the_ugly_ducktales yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Wait as I rewrite this story.......

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The Property of Balance

I didn’t sacrifice my life to create the Heavens in order for Gods to fight and dispute ownership over it in order to become the ‘King of Gods’ When I was alive, just the fact that I existed was enough to keep Gods and Demons at bay. But when I died, my fragile hand at peace to the multiverse broke. Ten Million Years may have passed, but now I’ve returned. I don’t care if there are dozens of God Kings or even if there is a God of Gods now. I’m done with trying to keep the peace in life so passively. Now, it’s the time for Judgement Day to arrive for each and every single individual that dared to start a Universe Wide War for the wrong reasons. After all, if I were to allow the chaos and disorder to run unhinged and with no stopper, then how can I call myself the God of Balance? - Alternate synopsis - I didn’t create the Heavens for the corrupted Gods to fight over it and mark the territory as its own. The Heavens was a defence system I created so that less and less incompetent and vile beings ascended into divinity and gain their own control over a Property. I may of died once after the creation of Heaven, but I’m back now and with the Property of Balance, I, the First One who Ascended to Divinity, will put those incompetent and vile beings in line and once ===== Prologue is a bit bland and a info dump... Updates are going to be random because I do have higher priorities than writing. Thanks for understanding :) Please read ten chapters before writing a review, even if the review is going to be good. I welcome Idea's and feedback on how to make my novel better, so don't hesitate to tell me!

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Hi author here and I just want to write a review here, not going to be a five star review sadly because as shameless as I am I do not have the audacity to say that I have a 5 star writing quality same for the other criterias I am already shameful enough to put a 4 star because I am still starting, I am a new kid on the block so don't bully me too much..ok~ anyways for a review on my own fanfic the writing quality is a tad bit bad because it is messy and will need some time to get used to (atleast I think so) stability of updates is going to be a five since it will be stable, only that the updates are slow, 1 per week (unfortunately so u_u) Story development, I am still early in to this story and I can say that I am truly doing my current best to make the story move and make it move in a good direction so 4 star hehe(shameless *ptewee*) Character design, I am currently trying to make it as human as possible, for the characters to feel like your listening to a conversation between people, real people, and for the characters to also feel complete and not just be static and stale characters... World background, yes, once again I'm doing my best on this so yeah 4 star hehehehe~ anyways that's all for my shameless review see you~

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