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Calamity rebirth

Penulis: rangersss44
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What is Calamity rebirth

Baca novel Calamity rebirth yang ditulis oleh penulis rangersss44 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Shiro is your typical high school student living a boring life in a boring world but everything is going to change...

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Shiro is your typical high school student living a boring life in a boring world but everything is going to change

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A Goddess suddenly transported Jake Evans and his classmates to another world. The Goddess granted her blessings to his classmates, causing them to have a class/job in that world. His classmate, Michael, received the Hero job, causing him to be valued by the Goddess and asking him to protect the humans from other forces. While Jake Evans didn’t receive blessings from the Goddess and unbeknownst to him, the Goddess even concluded to herself to send him to the Realm of the Devil. He implores her to give him another chance to be blessed. How could he live in an unknown world, where the slave system and other races who contested for power existed? But the Goddess was adamant about her decision to send her to the Devil's Realm and rejected him. Jake continued to plead, coming to the point he was crying. He didn’t notice that his cries didn’t contain joy or sorrow. However, the Goddess felt it was the cry of the devil... ======= This will be my second novel to attempt to improve my writing since my first was the big failure, which was the writing quality, and i want it to be perfected and thus i decided to create the second novel in aiming to improve my writing quality... Don't worry I also invest a lot of time in this novel to have a better characterization, and world background....... Hope you will like it. Average chapter = 1500 words.... until to the premium chaps. The Cover isn't mine, and just take it out in pinterest... If the owner has a problem with it, please go to my profile... My discord username was there and message me.... Thank you.

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So far, the story doesn't seem that overall bad. The storytelling isn't the best and needs to be improved though. From what I remember from the story, I'm pretty sure you haven't really introduced your character all that much yet. The story development isn't all that bad, I'd say that it's just fine. The world background from what I see it is not really all to well, but I can see that it's not the worst. You've only posted one chapter so far so it's kind hard to review the stability of updates, so yeah- I apologize if I'm completely wrong about this book, there is only one chapter so far after all. I believe that this book has potential though!

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