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Beyond the final second

Penulis: Mrak_Teni
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Baca novel Beyond the final second yang ditulis oleh penulis Mrak_Teni yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Loneliness, not a particularly bad circumstance, but what to do when you are completely alone in your room, not just unable to leave, but to die. This is the situation Victor found himself in, having ...

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Loneliness, not a particularly bad circumstance, but what to do when you are completely alone in your room, not just unable to leave, but to die. This is the situation Victor found himself in, having picked up strange clocks. Now, he must unravel the mystery of the clocks in order to escape this eternal captivity, or go insane in his dreams, as they may hide much more than meets the eye. *** I am a novice author, and I ask you to help with improving the quality of the text, with the comments.

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ALL POWERS BELONGS TO ME.

"Raze who had always been obsessed with NUNS from little cried his heart out when he later found out that NUNS where holy creatures who couldn't marry NITHER have sex. "But little did raze knew that this was just the beginning of his life as he constantly looked back while running at full speed through the bushy forest . "As a organization named blacktower sent some group of vipers after him, vipers where a well trained killing machine they wouldn't even blink their eyes when killing their prey. "Why me? "what in the world would they want from me I don't have anything of value for them to send their ultimate killing machine after me raze tought as he stepped into mud. "But couldn't care less as he later found out that he was sinking deeply into the mud "quick sand,"that was his last words as he got completely swolled by the mud. "On waking up raze saw that he was chained both by hand and leg to a mental table as a man named kalitus came in using raze for his research while getting tortured day and night . "Which later got to a point that raze was completely immune to pain as his soul was trapped completely inside the seal dimension in his body . "After months of torture kalitus became bored and ordered two of his shadow warriors to take raze into hell gate where he would get possessed by a spirt. Where his fate would be decided. ------------------------------------- please show your support if you enjoy the story.

Demonic_prince · Seram
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A Simple Wanderer

A scar has been carved through the Earth, a jagged canyon extends from the distance. At its end, it's deepest section, waves of heat distort view betone recognition. The crater bleeds molten rock down it's sides, still hot from this landmark's creation. The shadowy visage of a humanoid figure becomes recognisable as it comes further from the pit of magma that is the deepest part of the site. It stumbles, and light shining on its front reveals what looks like a human. Blood streaks down from its closed eyes, drawing lines in the layer of soot coating it. The soot covers it's body, but the light pink of it's exposed muscle couldn't be fully hidden. The skin covering it's heels and back was missing, having been worn onto the rock it parted. There would also be a bit spread through the atmosphere from the entry, but most of what is missing was taken upon impact. "Oh f*ck that hurt like a b*tch. Not my best landing." the creature groaned as it ran it's hands over the wounds. It then reached up and grabbed the dirtied skin of it's skull, and tore it apart like a seam. It ripped it down around his torso, having to push it along his arms like removing a too-tight sock. At the hands, it had to pull the finger tips away like a glove before peeling the skin off completely. The legs and feet were dealt with similarly. Stepping out of its own skin, muscle clear to the air with the exception of what the rock coated in soot, it says "Whelp, new world, new me!" in a tone much lighter than the situation would call for. Hello there. I'm a native English speaker/writer, so I like to think I know what I'm doing with this stuff but really though, I don't. So please correct any of my grammatical, cultural, or progressional (plot) errors in the chapter comments. I'm writing this for fun and to prove that if authors actually think for more than half a second when developing their stories, it can actually be good. I won't be updating very often unless this is met with an abnormally good reception, but yeah. Hope you enjoy!

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A good start, which is extraordinary, and an unusual atmosphere in the author's work. I hope there will be more, and fewer updates.

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