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Astral Transcendence

Penulis: Shyrlo
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What is Astral Transcendence

Baca novel Astral Transcendence yang ditulis oleh penulis Shyrlo yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. [!] I stopped posting this story here. I just want to test it here, guess I didn't have great luck. Anyway, I'm working on to post my finished project on Royal Road....

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[!] I stopped posting this story here. I just want to test it here, guess I didn't have great luck. Anyway, I'm working on to post my finished project on Royal Road.

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PAMPERED BY MY THREE BROTHERS: THE RETURN OF THE NEGLECTED HEIRESS

Penny has three brothers: one is a billionaire CEO, the second is the youngest military lieutenant, and the last is a successful actor. These three successful men had only one common ground: bullying Penny, their sore-eye of a little sister. The sister they never wished to have, and the one who claimed to be their real sister, while the sister they treasured all this time was a fake. After living a life of maltreatment in her aunt's home, some people of high standing came to Penny with news of her real parentage. She thought she was finally saved from her aunt’s clutches, unaware that what awaited her was worse. At 13, Penny only wished for one thing: for her brothers to love her and treat her like family, just as much as they loved their fake sister. She worked and studied ten times harder than anybody else just to be accepted by them. In her desperation, she foolishly fell into a trap set by a malicious person, not knowing her actions would result in the downfall of her brothers and her ending up in jail with a death sentence. On her execution day, Penny had only one thought in mind: If she ever got to go back in time, her brothers could pamper their fake sister for all she cared! She wanted nothing to do with them! And much to her surprise, Penny found herself back on the day it all began: the day she was born. As promised, this time, she wouldn’t foolishly try to earn her brothers' love and affection. Never mind family! She’d just make a lot of money, live in luxury, and make a family of her own! But wait, why is it now that she didn’t want anything to do with her brothers, they kept poking their noses into her business? Weren’t they supposed to pamper their fake sister? Why won’t they leave her alone?! And how on earth was she married in this lifetime? To make matters worse, this husband she never had in her first life was suddenly volunteering to be the father of her children?!

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Shyrlo
ShyrloPenulisShyrlo

This serialized story? I must say, I'm quite proud of how it has unfolded so far. Sure, there have been some bumps along the way, haha but I believe those imperfections add to the charm of it, right? Shamelessly, I'm going to give myself a 5 score review. Lol. Because I'm really enjoying writing this. Of course, I remain grounded and acknowledge that I still have much to learn as a writer. I hope I could see readers invested in my story and leaving comments of anticipation and excitement, it will motivates me to keep going. In the end, I'm humbled by the support and grateful for every reader who has embarked on this journey with me. It's a labor of love, and I couldn't be happier sharing this ATRAS story with the world. I hope it continues to captivate and entertain, as I continue to explore the twists and turns that await in the upcoming chapters. Thanks everyone.

SADIQ_AMRAN
SADIQ_AMRANLv1SADIQ_AMRAN

I'm not really good with giving review but this story definitely a hidden gem. The earlier chapters did well describing the MC. I love when he use his wit's instead of just brawn. I can't wait to see him grow stronger. The characters are fun to read, especially Garen. Also I like the setting of the trial. The author did well explaining it naturally. Definitely, I recommend this story to everyone who's seeking an adventure, action and smart MC.

Abdul_Hadi_5542
Abdul_Hadi_5542Lv1Abdul_Hadi_5542

So, this is my review for the story. I loves the MC already. The way his brain always thinking and using everything he have to make sure he got what he wants. I also like where he was an ambiguous person but at the same time a realist where he act based on what will benefits him the most. The MC being a genius doesn't feel like the author was forcing him to be that way. Or even lowering the IQ's of other characters to make the MC stand out. This is how I want a story of smart MC should be. Definitely, recommend this. Can't wait to see what's more to come from this fable.

DaoisthY5KLF
DaoisthY5KLFLv1DaoisthY5KLF

A simple but packed introduction to the mc and the game world....a unique interpretation to augmented and virtual reality....cant wait to see how the story unfolds...are the players trapped inside the game like sao???

SpaceBoy
SpaceBoyLv2SpaceBoy

Great start, what a way of introducing the MC. Less grammar error and good English proficiency. The plots seemed interesting. Not to forget that the world building is also compelling. This is my early review for now for the first 2 chapters. I want moreee chapters!!!

Danish_Nazli
Danish_NazliLv1Danish_Nazli

Flawless writing and amazing storyline. If there was titles for storytelling, this would be the maestro in the world of storytelling as it unfolds a beautiful story line as the story gets deeper and beyond. Would recommend to all age of readers especially to young readers and those who just started getting into e-novels

Herlyn_
Herlyn_Lv2Herlyn_

This is my review, as a friend, I'm really proud of this! I love the balances of comedy, emotional, and action in this novel. I also love the characters, they are such a joy to read! Especially, Garen!! Anyway, this is very promising, Ngl. Keep it up!!

Mesarik
MesarikLv1Mesarik

Raynold is a hard gamer, already a connection with most readers :D It's good that he uses his brain instead of overwhelming power. Garen is also a very nice character, his in genuine interest keeps it fresh form the classical evil Mod that runs the trial.

Daoistgr1PLj
Daoistgr1PLjLv1Daoistgr1PLj

Nice story i really love it the best story beautiful storyline good character. Interesting plot. The author is talented. I hope this novel will be loved and read by countless people

DaoistsTuaHQ
DaoistsTuaHQLv1DaoistsTuaHQ

This story is really promising. It is not your ordinary/typical isekai or op MC. It comes with unique and versatile plots and characters. I hope the writer will continue uploading this masterpiece.

Cheeseduck
CheeseduckLv1Cheeseduck

I took off a star from Writing Quality because I think the author often uses more complicated prose when simpler language would be better. It makes it harder to read smoothly. In short, it feels a little clunky at times. The other star I took off was from Character Design. Overall I feel like the characters are well-written, but I would have been more engrossed if I could get inside the head of the protagonist more. For example, when he meets The Guidance he 'teases' it with cookies, then gives it a nickname. If he is intentionally 'teasing' it, what is his goal? It doesn't seem like it's unintentional though, because it would indicate a naivete and frivolity that doesn't seem to fit. He's glib, maybe a little flippant, but not stupid. Anyway, I think the main character is lacking some depth, emotion, and internal conflict, but overall it's very good. I look forward to seeing where this goes!

Nitefall_
Nitefall_Lv1Nitefall_

A dreamy, fantastical, but heartfelt journey into another world. The characters have fun dynamics that are explored alongside the world that Shyrlo subtly builds up throughout the story. Highly recommend 👍

Dixerqua
DixerquaLv3Dixerqua

Finally, it's about time for me to share my review, don't you think? First of all the story is well-crafted which keeps me intrigued about what's going to happen next. Then there's the inclusion of emotional moments adds a sense of adaptability to the narrative. The complexity of the game may not appeal to everyone, but enthusiasts of literature and those who enjoy action/game genres will undoubtedly love it to the core. Keep going hero!

Sofea_Nasruddin
Sofea_NasruddinLv1Sofea_Nasruddin

This novel can be catogarized as the best novel i have ever read,the plot and creativity of the storyline enhance the quality of the story and this is great for education purpouse also due to many rare volcabulary used and i bet the writer would have done a great job on publishing this novel..worth reading🤭

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