Altar of Mnemosyne

Hello, this is our first time writing a novel. In fact, we have gathered the ideas for this story since quite a long time. But, until before, we have some hesitations to publish it. Please give us an honest review to better our story. Thank you :)

There are too few chapters, still The starting is good hope to see more of Arthur Adventure. And if u can just make the paragraph shorter it will be more good. I am also waiting in front of the open curtains to hear more from 'The Original' hehe plz continue to update more cuz readers usually Like to read Novels with a lot of chps.

I like novels that are filled with mystery, so I can definitely say I loved it. The Main character Arthur is very interesting. Really excited to see what direction this novel take as it is a really different story

Hm... pretty good. But seriously, I do like the new approach in writing. Differently writing styles are always appreciated, but the fact this is more of a mystery instead of a OP fantasy is never a bad thing. I think you are doing great things author!

I had so much fun reading it. The plot is well-rooted, the chapters are of good length, and in no way does the author let's reader's attention go to anything else other than this story. In only a few places, grammar was a bit askew. But other than that, this is a fantastic story that I would recommend to anyone who wants to read an engrossing story. Have added it to my library.

It seems that the author is trying something new, I like it. Among the sea of many overpowered power fantasy story, suddenly we got offered a mystery story focusing on a college student. The character of Arthur Rolyn seem interesting too, but even him would not be able to defeat the greatness of Mr. Narrator and his sassy comments. Truly, the best character here would be Mr. Narrator himself. I will look forward to the future of this story.

Okay..so far I read the first chapter and find it quite interesting ...the character of Authur seems to hold so many elements within to make him more and more fascinating. I would love to read about his journey. The more I read the more I felt myself drawn in the storyline. The author did a good job with other features as well world background is marvelous and the sayonips hold enough teasing to draw a reader in... Good luck author

Hello! Another greetings from the author. Now then, I think that maybe some of the readers are quite confused with the countries mentioned in this story and their geographical positions. And so, I attached a prototype of the Map of Eos in this review. Although because it is a prototype, there might still be some names that haven't or need to be changed later. For example, Andalus have been changed to Eandalus. I'll also keep note and post a reply when changing the names written on the map. Thank you very much! May you have a fun time reading :)