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Achieve yours goal

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108 Galaxies

Wei Chen, a young archaeologist, was granted the black card, and has received a task from the Archaeology Headquarters to visit Galaxy 10. It is a new galaxy on the other side of the Great Barrier that has not yet been opened to the public. But before he could even accomplish this, his mind was invaded by a time-traveling ancient cultivator and was devoured. With the absence of spiritual energy and Qi, all seems lost in cultivating, until an unknown secret is revealed. --------------------------------------------------------------- I know there’s an issue with info dumps and slow development, but I can’t help the second part. That’s why I created multiple auxiliary chapters where most of the info dumps are put into. They constantly update as the story progresses. Trust me, the info dumps and slow building will gradually go away! It starts accelerating at chapter 14 so don't worry! -------------------------------------------------------------- Update: I hope you all understand that I'm just using the democratic system because I'm most familiar with it, as an American. I am not brainwashed by western media to think that the Chinese government is all bad and stuff. I have a broader perspective nowadays, so I hope any Chinese folk understand. -------------------------------------------------------------- Update: I also want to mention that I know my strengths and weaknesses in making novels: Strengths: 1. I'm strong in science aspects 2. Strong at making action/adventure scenes 3. Okay at plot progression and story development (needs improvement) 4. Good at noticing errors 5. I have quite a creative mind and can come up with plenty of ideas on the run Weaknesses: 1. I suck at creating characters with personality 2. I suck at characterization, expressing thoughts and emotions for characters. 3. I'm not very good at drama or romance stuff 4. My ADHD interferes with my ability to stay focused which is a reason for slow releases (going to my doctor to get that solved). 5. My ADHD also makes my emotions go up and down a lot, which affects my ability to type (going to my doctor to get that solved). 6. College~! It is for these reasons that I'm looking for a legit co-author who has character development, drama, romance, etc. as a strength. I really don't mind if you're male, female, American, Chinese, British, etc. As long as you can converse in clear English, and you are legit, then I am fine with cooperating. Message me on Discord and I'll try to respond in my free time. Discord: https://discord.gg/DzYaT9P

LemonGrenade · perkotaan
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37 Chs

वरदान एक चमत्कार

जैसे ही उसने आखिरी निवाला उस फकीर ने खाया ,वो फकीर एक चमत्कारी देवता के रूप में बदल गया । उसने राजा को आशीर्वाद दिया हे, "राजन मैं तुम्हारे राज्य में तुम्हारे धर्म की परीक्षा लेने आया था ।" "तुम अपने धर्म में खरे उतरे इसलिए मैं तुम्हें आशीर्वाद देता हूं, कि तुम्हें पुत्र प्रदान हो ।" "क्योंकि तुम्हारे भाग्य में संतान का सुख नहीं है , इसलिए पुत्र के जन्म के कुछ समय बाद तुम्हारी मृत्यु हो जाएगी।" " क्योंकि तुम्हारे राज्य की प्रजा ने मुझे देख कर घड़ा की और मुझ पर पत्थरों से बार किया ,इसके परिणाम तुम्हें भुगतना होगा।" "क्योंकि तुम प्रजा के पालनहार हो और इसीलिए तुम्हारी प्रजा जो भी कार्य करेगी उसका उसका फल या अशुभ फल तुम्हें यह तुम्हारे पुत्र को भुगतना पड़ेगा ।" और हां राजन तुम्हारा पुत्र बहुत ही पराक्रमी योद्धा होगा ।" " उसके सामने मनुष्य क्या देव दानव भी नहीं खड़े रहे सकेंगे। इतना बोल कर वह देवता अदृश्य हो गया।" कुछ दिनों बाद रानी के गर्भवती होने की सूचना पूरे राज्य में आप की लपटों की तरह फैल गई। महाराजा राजकुमार के आगमन के लिए बेसब्री से इंतजार करने लगे । धीरे-धीरे समय गुजरता गया और 9 महीने बाद राजकुमार का जन्म हुआ। वह बच्चा सूर्य के समान चमक रहा था, और चंद्रमा के समान उसके मुख पर तेज था। राजकुमार के जन्म पर खुशियों की हर तरफ उत्सव का माहौल था। राजा बहुत खुश था। उन्होंने बड़े बड़े पंडित को राजकुमार के नाम की नामकरण की विधि की। क्योंकि उनको राजकुमार फकीर के वरदान से मिला था, इसीलिए उन्होंने उसका नाम वरदान रखा । उसका नाम राजकुमार वरदान रखा गया गया। और दूसरी तरफ राजा के मंत्री और विद्रोही वरदान के जन्म से खुश नहीं थे। वह बच्चे को मारना चाहते थे। बच्चे को मारने की चालें चलने लगे। जब भी वे लोग राजकुमार के उसके आसपास जाते, कोई अदृश्य शक्ति उनको अपने इरादों में सफल नहीं होने देती थी। वरदान की सुरक्षा कवच बन कर उसकी रक्षा करती थी । वरदान 5 साल का होने वाला था । और राजा उसको युवराज घोषित करना चाहते थे। इससे पहले राजा ऐसा कर पाता, विद्रोहीऔ ने राजा की हत्या कर दी , और वो रानी और वरदान को भी मारने के लिए निकल गए । जैसे ही रानी को यह सब पता चला , रानी ने अपने बच्चे के साथ भेस बदल कर राज्य से भाग गई।

Renu_Chaurasiya_0803 · Sejarah
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Sovereign of Paradise

Sovereign of Paradise. (Undergoing Rewrite) The oasis of death that Tylem yearned for had at long last come, or so he thought. Failing to defeat the unique heart cancer, Tylem, an eighteen-year-old youth who went through his entire life without anyone, ends up reincarnating. Little did Tylem know… that at the final moments, his still-beating heart had clawed out from within, spitting out a mysterious ball of light that would change his tragic life forever. Viewed as a genius, follow Tylem as he traverses his childhood once more, seeing the bleak world remain all the same. The evil mother, who disdains him, willingly departs to visit King Yama with a smile. In front of the hanging rope, Tylem’s clear eyes resembled a calm lake, the familiar landscape mocking his empty heart. This time around, Tylem will coldly walk through the ordeal of life without the stinging tears that once clouded his judgment. From a tragic youth, he shall climb up and finally find his place in the world, evolving along the way. Come read the long, emotional tale about how a cultivator conquers the impossible Tutorial, see through Tylem’s eyes of how he, a heartbroken son, orchestrates a grand plan to descend the twelve chaos rings into great mayhem. Join Tylem on a story about how relationships can come and go, learning the ways of the world. Goal: I will start uploading two chapters a day once we hit one-thousand powerstones in a single week. Thank you all for the support! . . . . . . Warning from Author: This novel is not for everyone, even more so the faint of heart. It takes on a darker, sinister outlook at times. 'With Cultivation, I Will Defeat the Tutorial' is a thought-provoking tale about a youth still trying to find his place in a world that doesn't need him. If you're looking for a predictable, unchanging MC who has a very clear motive from the beginning, this is not the place. Furthermore, as much as I wish that I could manage to write a perfect story, I, alas, cannot. I’m just one measly human, and plot holes will very likely exist—along with cliches. I might also forget things and repeat information at times because of it. Apologies in advance. Regarding the stability of updates, I have work, but I’ll try my best to ensure consistency. Like most people, the characters in the story don't make perfect decisions, but it will fit their character and age—followed with reason and justification. The first arc can be considered a very long prologue focused on the explanation and development of Tylem and his mindset before the main plotline takes place. . . . . . .

Elude · Fantasi
4.9
44 Chs

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