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Abyss Of Inferno

Fantasy Romance
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Baca novel Abyss Of Inferno yang ditulis oleh penulis Melkeveien_0506 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. "You ripped me of my entire existence. I will take your holy soul, for I shall be born again from the malevolence burning my onyx soul."Mellisent Argyris was the only daughter of the fallen commander ...

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"You ripped me of my entire existence. I will take your holy soul, for I shall be born again from the malevolence burning my onyx soul." Mellisent Argyris was the only daughter of the fallen commander of the kingdom 'Valor' from the human realm 'Travanos'. Following her father's death, her only kin, Mellisent, joins the 'Valhalla Academe', a centre with a vision of maintaining peace within human and mythical lands. Her sole aim is to train and return to seek vengeance for the massacre of her family. Though determined to become a warrior and join the prestigious army of Valor, destiny has other plans for her when her fate interweaves with the fae prince Aurelius Welkinns. Both their lives turn upside down as they discover the truth about their existence with the formation of relationships surpassing time and realms. Follow her journey as she struggles to seek revenge and creates an identity of her own. ************ "You don't know what you're getting yourself into, Prince Aurelius," said Mellisent as a pair of strong arms pushed her against the cold wall. "I know what I'm indulging myself into. I'm like a moth drawn towards a flame," said Aurelius as he moved his face closer to hers such that their breaths mingled into one. "I'm not a flame but an abyss that would combust you to ashes," Mellisent warned as her breath came out into small puffs. "Then I would love to delve into that abyss," said Aurelius as his lips engulfed hers. ************** P.S. This is my first novel, so I request the readers to support my work and point out my shortcomings so that I can improve my writing skills, and I'm open to suggestions regarding the novel. The story will be a bit slow-paced at the start and gradually build up to the point where the real journey of the FL starts. # The cover of the novel is mine.

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The novel has potential, especially with the combination of different mythical lands and the theme of seeking vengeance. The interactions between Mellisent and Aurelius are intriguing, and their relationship could provide a strong backbone for the story. However, the summary feels a bit cliche, and it would be helpful to have more unique elements to set it apart from other fantasy romance novels. Consider adding in more unique elements to make the story stand out, such as a unique magic system or a twist on typical fantasy tropes. Additionally, try to focus on developing the characters and their motivations, so readers can connect with them on a deeper level.

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Well, a shameless review from the author itself. Leave a review and let me know how you like the novel so far. Last but not least, I'm all up for suggestions.

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