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(I Stole and re-wrote)Naruto: Kokushibo Template System

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Original novel by Demon_Asmodeo (https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4318777614?appId=10) Orignal novels Synopsis: 'Obtain the First Upper Moon Template and reincarnate in the world of Naruto to reach the pinnacle of the sword and rule in the world of Naruto.' I am re-writing someones novel without asking so I'm letting you all know that; I lay claim to no credit for anything but what I changed to order to fix mistakes I had notice while reading the original. After all, I'm only doing this to improve my own proofreading skills and make the original fanfic better as it has a lot of mistakes in its grammar and spelling.

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xlvlx
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Thx for making it easier to read. Idk how many chp the original has but i hope u can update as soon as possible

Dr200
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Much better

Haz_the_dreamer
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Very nice, much better now that you edited it, since you like to edit works could you See if you can edit monster integration, the grammar is pretty bad but the story seems interesting?

FrogEatingBaguette
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the story isn't bad, there are a few mistakes throughout the novel but it is still enjoyable. Story itself is interesting even thought there is a few questionable things. ps. I haven't read the original so I don't know how much better it is.

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