[Currently Rewriting In Progress] Beast of Winter

oooh i liked it already i can see where it would go please when he got the summar beast let one of his abilities be sunshine and elements fire magma and ...... oh and since it's dxd harem i would like if you take grayfia yasaka kuroka serafall venelana ( change rias and sirzech mother to another women ) tsubaki raynare kalawner ravel ( engagement him with ravel and riser and rias like the story before issei come to rescue her .... ravel was intel and she helped issei too much but he made her a minor girl in his harem so he don't deserve her )

To be honest, if I can rate this less than 1, I would. This is the definition of a gold turned to sh*t half-baked novel that needs someone who doesn't give a f*ck about anything to enjoy it. I felt so annoyed that I either had to hit someone (preferably the author) or rant about how annoyed I am here. My disappointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined. Goodbye.....

As a shameless person, I write my review as 5 stars. First of all, I want to say this is a single pairing fiction, not a harem one so if you don't like it don't read it. Second, MC is OP so please don't comment like what he's so broken or whatever. Third, His action would actually affect how the story progresses. As the 6 beasts already got rid of the notion following the canon. There would be elements from canon but not all of them

i agree with Obito_Tobi this abilities would make him op like you want can train the peerage of rias and sona to be strong i also want his harem to have grayfia serafall yasaka and kuroka at least tsubaki ravel and venelana not too important like the others also xenovia is important for me with the ones above sona is good but that would make him hated by sona's pawn saiji maybe or any member of rias peerage as they are issei harem only xenovia or you can let her be in issei harem

This entire story could’ve been good but went all the way to **** with 2nd transmigrator and literally EVERY FUCKING SINGLE aspect of the mc circumstances are against him making this story a complete and utter disappointment, like why would you bother writing a ****ty pre canon plot if the plot is so bad it ruins whatever you tried to do with the story? Only way to discribe what I feel after reading this is sad and utterly disappointed, thought I had found a gem but stupid Author ruined it all with his attempt at plot

The main character is ****ty trash. He doesn’t even use his cheats. The weakest. There, even another immigrant after him came and became much stronger than him. Trash, trash, trash, trash, trash, trash, trash

Interesting and i would want more but i hope you dont follow the same plot as other (joining rias or other devils i mean he is created before them why would he join devils? I think he should have some pride arrogance in that he is superior to them or something) Harem... no please we just already have seen enough and like i said he is not just some lowly horny human/devil etc? Wel what i mean is dont take the same route as others do something special and unique to you

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