Blu12Lv12mth
2024-08-25 20:10
I enjoyed your characters a lot and the overall feel of your story. There’s only two chapters so that’s why everything isn’t five stars. Your writing is reallly good. The dialogue and mannerisms flow and are realistic, the scenes are subtle and entertaining. I can’t wait to see what are your plans for the rest of the story. I feel like it’s going to get really “messy!” In a good way of course!
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Thank you very much!
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