Review Detail of Gawain_8692 in The Codex Eternal

I’ve read up to chapter 25. It’s good so far, and it has a lot of potential. My only real complaint is that you need to have a native English speaker edit it. Everything is spelled correctly, but the grammar is not quite there yet. It is obvious that the author isn’t fully fluent yet. Other than that, I’m really excited to see where this goes!