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Luc4r1oLv151mth
2024-09-21 15:29

We haven't really learned much about the world yet but what we got so far was very intriguing I like the pace of the Story so far not to fast and not to slow, so perfect for me I like the characters even more because you don't immediately get what is going on with them And the mc because he goes his own path instead of following the system The Update's are coming without problem so nothing much i can say except please continue like this The english isn't always correct and there is a bit of word mambo jumbo at times but not in a way that you don't get the intent of the words and he also doesn't mind if you correct it so he can edit it, so even better So all i can say it's been great fun reading so far and i hope you continue like this And for the last part of the chapter

In My Favorite Novel As The Final Villain

TheCrimson
4.2
155 Chs

Aimé par 3 personnes

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TheCrimson
TheCrimsonAuteur

Thank you for your congratulations! And thank you for the review! I've been putting a lot of effort into creating this story. I know my English is not the best, so I want to hire an editor when I have enough money, to edit all the chapters. I hope to keep seeing you reading!

1mth
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The_Ruler_001
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A five star reiview for intersting story and character development

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radioactive_jig0l0
radioactive_jig0l0Lv4

reading this gave me diarrhoea , author please work on your grammar , yo can also take help of chat gpt to proof read your chapters for you so that you won't change the pronounce of Mc from He to She IN A SINGLE PARAGRAPH AND RUIN OUR MOOD!

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STILL_HARD
STILL_HARDLv3

author is there Yuri or ntr in it I hope not BTW great novel

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Aim_zx
Aim_zxLv14

A villain MC who only cares about his harem! Sign me up! At least, that's what I got from the synopsis. Am I right?

1mth
IrisGood
IrisGoodLv3

It's a good story, a good world, very good characters (especially Theos), and a fairly constant publication pace. What more can I ask for? Excellent! The MC is a villain, but one who cares about his harem; for now, it's Alice and Luna, and by the looks of it, he's going to grow even more. The MC is someone quite ruthless but loving to his loved ones; he's quite powerful, the greatest genius of the generation. Also, there are a lot of mysteries and quite interesting ones. I hope the author keeps up the great work!

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Vienass
VienassLv13

Can you upload the chapters a little faster? Because I love reading this series.

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Fruce
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i want a Alice of my own. #AliceForLife.

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roy001
roy001Lv3

is it going to be Harem or single FL ??? well I prefer Harem .... but whatever it is ,I am loving your story writing ..💯👊

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Jaywxrld
JaywxrldLv4

got me itch I'll give higher overall when more chapter are out

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