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Review Detail of B6_12nn3 in DxD: Rise Of Sloth

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B6_12nn3
B6_12nn3Lv11mthB6_12nn3

here's a proper review since i see none on this fic. the writing quality is decent barely any spelling mistake updates are pretty frequent as well. however the characters are lazily written while the premise of the story was that the mc will be a lazy bum it also blocks off any realistic character development. his relation with his sister and maid are just too cliche the typical bro con older sister and a maid who gets jealous over someone else serving the mc. And why would great red of all beings have a complex for serving the mc even if he was asked to be his maid there was no development about their relation . there is only few chapters worth of material right now to give a longer review currently. however up until now the story has been pretty mid. it is not bad per say but its one of those lazily written stories that has really noting going around them and you read them only out of boredom.

DxD: Rise Of Sloth

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1AxellexA1
1AxellexA1Auteur1AxellexA1

pretty much a correct review , I started writing this on a whim cuz i liked the idea of writing a lazy mc. And story wise this fic might not hold a candle to the great ones on this platform because I haven't thought about it much. anyway thanks for taking your time and writing this review

AlanCee
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Otakubaku
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Should have either a Harem member be the initiation for him to take part in plot or just have the guy be the super slacker that could show up after some one begs for help something.