Overall It's a nice work anyway Just that the story started abruptly with no explanation on the world background And also the updating stability is not so nice but you did a pretty decent job at the battlefield Nice one for that
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LIKEIt's my first chapter, I'll be updating daily. As for MCs past life, I don't want to touch on it too much. If this novel does well, I intend on writing a story on it eventually. I intentionally did this because revealing about his past life, how and why he died will reveal a lot of clues about why he reincarnated. I said to someone in the comments that his reincarnation is totally different from anything seen before. So bear with please 🙏🏼, it's something I planned on revealing as a bombshell later on. Thanks for your review.