Item: Valhalla in HOTD
Rating: 5

Crimson_Star96Lv23mth

2024-08-01 18:40

I like everything in this fanfic, except for the pairing, but this is the author's work and it is up to the author to decide. I am very happy with the Stark family tree, since they are my favorite house in Martin's universe, and the other Valyrian house, since I do not like the Targaryens very much. I also really like that you support the work with images, I am also happy with the theme and clothing of the assassins. The only negative is the fights between people, I ask you to improve the writing and the fact that despite all the difficult and harsh training, the main character barely defeated some thenn, who did not have powerful training and the fact that he received injuries from Damon. Please do not look at the haters, when you like something, rarely does anyone write about it, thinking that it is obvious and they read it silently, and when you don't like something, it is much easier and more pleasant to write a review. Please continue.

Valhalla in HOTD

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