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Dreamer_1297
Dreamer_1297Lv41mthDreamer_1297

try writing a better summary as the current one is too vague and uninteresting ..

Strongest Spirit Beast Master Family

Regretz

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Regretz
RegretzAuteurRegretz

tq for advise

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Venerable_Adam
Venerable_AdamLv4Venerable_Adam

i never read this but you are a bit harsh

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Pronoobity
PronoobityLv15Pronoobity

I would argue he is not incorrect. Your Synopsis of the book is your reader’s second look into the book. Now this is half just a personal thing, but do not repeat your characters full name three times. It is redundant and in my opinion, Regret is a very cringey last name. To repeat it twice more is crazy.

Regretz:tq for advise
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Pronoobity
PronoobityLv15Pronoobity

Damn didn’t even notice the author name. Sorry bro

Pronoobity:I would argue he is not incorrect. Your Synopsis of the book is your reader’s second look into the book. Now this is half just a personal thing, but do not repeat your characters full name three times. It is redundant and in my opinion, Regret is a very cringey last name. To repeat it twice more is crazy.
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