Review Detail of DaoistEa7GgZ in MY OBSESSED BILLIONAIRE CEO

I'm really gonna be honest and no offence is intended. there's something wrong with this story well the story itself may be good. but the terrible grammar? failing to settle on first person POV or third person POV ? the story even gets confusing in between. and personally, I find the FL's boldness as too extreme for a story's begging. she curses like she's the villain of the story and it's uncomfortable really . so dear author, make quick corrections on this novel . I'm even starting to wonder whether all those people who gave good reviews really meant it or they just read the prologue and rated the novel just for the sake of a free FP because I don't understand how none of them mentioned this mistakes which are in 80% of the beginning chapters(well , that's the only part I managed to read ). so really , look into it.