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2024-08-12 20:50

Excellent story, constant updating and a well-developed Protagonist. I hope you don't rush Furina's romance with Tempest, doing something too superficial could ruin the story. I'm very curious to know how Tempest became Admiral, his future relationships with Fontaine's characters, and how he met Nahida.

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