It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/story and great translation/english.. The grammar is good too... I like the idea about system which help MC make/invent his new jutsu.. And all the jutsu is also very great and useful.. I like his relationship with Minato, Kushina, etc.. I understand that he can get experient from others who learn and practice his new jutsu.. But I think he's dumb and fool when he give Basic Inner Jutsu to Konoha.. He should not give the powerful like Basic Inner Jutsu (or anymore which useful and stronger) to Konoha (the Root is use his jutsu to fight him).. He say that he give it so he can saw Forbidden Scroll, but as Uchiha Hiruzen and his Council will not let him see it.. If he want to success and save, he should eliminate Danzo and make Hiruzen and his Council step down.. (hope he will kill Danzo soon) Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job 😁👍👍😍😍😍
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