Review Detail of Habutheri in Total War : Shogun in another world

Its actually South African, and is my writing that bad that it can be considered a MTL?

Do you want to hear the truth? The writing isn't bad, but I read three chapters and stopped, maybe I'll keep reading if I remember about this. From what I remember, the prologue is the protagonist being reincarnated as the son of an earl and for some reason he received a barony, but what made me too lazy to continue reading is the system. I tried to read it and lost interest, I'm not saying that your fanfic is bad, the problem is with me, I have other things to read. Regarding my review, I was already expecting a chinese fanfic because of the title and synopsis, so I just made a joke before reading it. I bet the possibly chinese protagonist would summon units from Total Wars: Shogun 2 to fight for him.

I'll try to read it again later and let you know what I thought of your writing.