Review Detail of Irebornintheboys in I am Invincible!?

Listen I’m not even 2 episodes in, multiple changes have been made. There isn’t much he can change right now, he’s nowhere near Omni-Man’s strength and if he warns anyone he gets his teeth kicked in. I mean idk what you expect, it’s said he’s constantly training and trying to make Allies with Robot and Eve. So please tell me what changes you would make?

fanfictions like this one, there are already 4 on the site ALL FOLLOW THE DAMN CANON no one original The best fanfiction that I follow are the ones where reincarnated characters change things drastically like this fanfiction where there is the nen of Hunter x Hunter in Game of Thrones. or a more recent one where someone is reincarnated as Clark Kent and is more dangerous than the original, it's enjoyable to read. there the 4 invincible fanfiction you put them next to each other and you play the game of 7 differences, you won't find seven.

self original, self adventurous, the excuse of it's the beginning doesn't work like with the examples I gave. gives him the powers of Superman, whether he is directly at his father's level to confront him, or an adaptability... makes Nolan more in love with his family or guardians stronger and Nolan would have had to run away and where mark is locked up subject to making nolan give in... there are plenty of ways to do it other than stupidly following the canon without changing much. it's just that you have no imagination, or that you're lazy

bro if you don't like it don't read it's because of people like you that great fics with potential stops updating the chapters.

how do you know what you don't like without reading it? and if I'm so critical it's because of my disappointment, not just to shout into the void. and where is the potential IT FOLLOWS THE CANNON

My man, of course it follow Cannon we are 2 episodes in rn? In those 2 episodes Mark can do what? Call the guardians? They wouldn’t take him seriously plus he has no way of contacting them? So yes of course it’s going to follow Cannon at the start of the fanfic smh

I clearly explained how to create an original story following the canon or not, you don't want to listen too bad.

Yes but I want to write about someone in Mark Grayson, with Marks powers. I mean it’s pretty clear he’s in Marks body with Marks powers. Let’s say I reincarnated him as someone else it would be cool sure but that’s not what I’m writing rn is it? So realistically what can MARK do differently other than training a ton more, trying to build bonds and preparing for the fall out of Omni Man

Yeah no, you really didn’t you just listed examples of someone being reincarnated in different power systems, whereas my fanfic is someone waking up in Mark Graysons body, with no new powers just plain old Mark Grayson.